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Original Song: “River of Time” with Commentary

Image: Whitewater River, Richmond IN  

Original Song: “River of Time” with Commentary

My original song “River of Time” is a hymn to my Divine Belovèd, featuring a chorus that functions as a chant.

Introduction with Text of Lyric “River of Time”

Because music was my first love that I remember from the earliest age, I have always been attracted by the sounds from inspiring music.  

I began writing songs seriously around age 32, and I especially enjoy and appreciate my songs that turn into hymns to the Divine Belovèd.  “River of Time” is such a hymn.  

I am strongly influenced by the Cosmic Chants of my guru (spiritual leader) Paramahansa Yogananda.  Many of my original hymns have a chant-like element—a repetition that takes the minds within or bespeaks some spiritual truth for mental awareness.

River of Time

A hymn to my Divine Belovèd

Verse
Waiting by the river of time—
My beloved keeps His rime
In the sunlight that sings in stars
The moon will wax in tune

Verse
Flowing with the river of time—
Do you feel the rhythm that glides
As you sing each lingering verse?
Your soul will chant in bliss

Verse
Once beyond the river of time—
Where you seek your ultimate rime,
Where you need to battle no more
You’ve reached that heavenly shore

Chorus
Every moment is light infused  
Behind the darkness of closed eyes
Seek no more for all is here
Nothing more to do or fear

Video by Carlene Craig

Commentary on “River of Time”

The singer/seeker/devotee in this hymn does not directly address her Heavenly Father-God.  She suggests the target of her report in subtle ways by essentially addresses her own self or soul. She sings to remind herself of her goal of soul- or self-realization, unity with the Divine Belovèd.

First Verse:  Existence on the Physical Plane

Waiting by the river of time—
My beloved keeps His rime
In the sunlight that sings in stars
The moon will wax in tune

The singer/devotee exists along a continuum that the human mind and heart often liken metaphorically to a river—a “river of time.”  Time seems to flow, meander, going somewhere.

Intuition tells the human mind and heart that the soul is moving as on a flowing body of water to somewhere that must be wonderful.

The beloved who is causing this river to flow displays his wares in light—sunlight and moonlight.  Science tells humanity that sunlight is reflected in the stars, and the moon also reflects that important, life-sustaining orb.

The singer/devotee implies that her beloved is a poetic artist because he keeps “His rime” visible in the light of the sun and the moon.

Second Verse:  The Rhythm of Soul Bliss

Flowing with the river of time—
Do you feel the rhythm that glides
As you sing each lingering verse?
Your soul will chant in bliss

The singer then states that her soul is, in fact, moving down this metaphorical river.  She poses a rhetorical question of her self to ascertain if she is really sensing the rhythmic sway of the music of her verses.

As she sings, she has become aware of her soul flowing into its natural state of “bliss.”  The verses that linger in the heart and mind bestow on her a marvelous state of awareness and joy.

Third Verse:  Transcending Physical Existence

Once beyond the river of time—
Where you seek your ultimate rime,
Where you need to battle no more
You’ve reached that heavenly shore

The singer then begins to speculate about the existence to be experienced after transcending the physical level of existence, metaphorically named the “river of time.”  

Beyond that locus is where the ultimate poetry and music hold sway, where humanity no longer is required to struggle with life’s vicissitudes, trails, and tribulations.  Once the soul has become self-realized, it knows only divine joy and love.

Chorus:  Moving into the Joy of the Light

Every moment is light infused  
Behind the darkness of closed eyes
Seek no more for all is here
Nothing more to do or fear

The singer’s repeated, chant-like chorus is an affirmative statement about what goes on after she closes her eyes to the physical level of existence.

She need not continue searching for she has arrived at the Goal of life. United with the Divine Belovèd, there is nothing that she will ever have to fear.

Video:  Whitewater River-Tim Bowman-East Fork of the Whitewater River-near Brownsville IN 

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