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  • Emily Dickinson’s “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir”

    Image:  Emily Dickinson - Amherst College - Daguerrotype of the poet at age 17, circa 1847 - likely the only authentic, extant likeness of the poet
    Image: Emily Dickinson – Amherst College – Daguerrotype of the poet at age 17, circa 1847 – likely the only authentic, extant likeness of the poet

    Emily Dickinson’s “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir”

    Emily Dickinson’s “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir” features prominently a surprising demand of the Divine Belovèd Creator. The Dickinsonian speaker always holds in great reverence and regard the Creator of the cosmic universe and all of earthly nature.

    Introduction with Text of “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir”

    Emily Dickinson’s poem, “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir,” demonstrates the poet’s depth of scientific knowledge of the world as well as her insight into the spiritual significance that such scientific knowledge implies for human evolution.

    The poem features prominently a surprising demand of the Divine Belovèd Creator. The Dickinsonian speaker always holds in great reverence and regard the Creator of the cosmic universe and all of earthly nature. 

    She dramatizes in poetic form her physical world observations to reveal her awareness of the Divine Creator’s existence both within the natural world and outside of that natural world, extending into the realm of spirit.

    The octave is structured by a “when-then” time sequence: when one thing happens, then the other may be expected to happen or may be desired to happen. In this poem, the structure adds a complex sub-feature to the equation. 

    Not only is the speaker offering a “when” structure that encompasses three natural phenomena of plant and animal kingdom activity, but she is also adding a third element from the human realm to the “when” clause.

    The speaker has thus inserted herself into the narrative in an unobtrusive way through the employment of the synecdochic”hand.” After setting up the “when” application, she engages her own action and then offers the second half of the “when-then” function. 

    That “then” application, however, delivers a subtle demand of the Belovèd Creator—one that may at first appear somewhat shocking but yet remains comprehensible and infinitely appropriate.

    When Roses cease to bloom, Sir

    When Roses cease to bloom, Sir,
    And Violets are done –
    When Bumblebees in solemn flight
    Have passed beyond the Sun –
    The hand that paused to gather
    Upon this Summer’s day
    Will idle lie – in Auburn –
    Then take my flowers – pray!

    “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir” rendered in song  

    Commentary on “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir”

    Emily Dickinson’s “When Roses cease to bloom, Sir” demonstrates the poet’s depth of knowledge of the science of the evolutionary progress, as well as her insight into the spiritual significance that such knowledge suggests for the human mind and heart on its path through evolutionary advancement.

    First Movement:  Emphasis on Beauty

    When Roses cease to bloom, Sir,
    And Violets are done –

    The speaker begins the “when” function by addressing the Divine Ineffable Reality.  She suggests that she will be asking for some favor after flowers have come and gone.   She allows “Roses” and “Violets” to represent all natural vegetation, which would include all plants growing in the fields, along the streets, and in her own vegetable garden.  

    By allowing only two lovely flowers to represent all of the plant kingdom, the speaker is demonstrating her emphasis on her love of beauty.   The speaker then demonstrates that she is including both domesticated plants—roses, and those that continue to grow wild—violets.  

    The Blessèd Author of creation as well as the speaker’s listeners/readers are invited to observe that the speaker keeps her mind firmly on her goal, her own creation of beauty and engagement in health and wholesomeness.

    Second Movement:  Evolution from Plant to Animal

    When Bumblebees in solemn flight
    Have passed beyond the Sun –

    The speaker then turns to the animal kingdom, allowing the simple bumblebee to represent that kingdom.  The “Bumblebees” have engaged in “solemn flight” and like the roses and violets are now passing out of existence.  

    Unlike the rose that “cease[s] to bloom” and the violet whose passing out of existence is qualified as merely “done,” the bee, an evolutionarily higher-stationed member of the animal kingdom, “pass[es] beyond the Sun.”  

    The speaker makes the distinction between the two kingdoms in this marvelously ingenious way–how they cease their summer sojourn.   As flowers simply pass away by simple cessation, the bees have engaged in the physical act of moving, which is denied plants rooted to the earth; thus, the speaker creates the bees’ metaphorical passing beyond light.  

    Even though the souls of all those creatures remain distinct entities in the mind of their Creator, they express in very different ways according to their current incarnation on earth, representative of their individual and collective karma.  It is only natural that the higher evolved bee would demonstrate an ability beyond that of the lower plant world.  

    And the speaker’s ability to place this distinction in such a minimalist setting demonstrates this speaker’s understanding regarding the existence of the hierarchy to which earthly creatures remain attached until their final liberation.   All created beings must pass through this hierarchical system on their way from lowest to highest form on the evolutionary scale.

    Third Movement:  The Human in Creation

    The hand that paused to gather
    Upon this Summer’s day

    The speaker has now quit her focus on the plant and animal kingdoms and is focusing on the simple human feature of a “hand,” a synecdochic representative of the human physical encasement.  

    That hand pauses.  Instead of moving to pluck and collect those flowers before they are gone, this hand leaves them in place.  Instead of shooing away the bees, the speaker simply takes the measure of their movement, while fashioning the observation that distinguishes the flowers from the bees. 

    All summer long, the speaker has observed the bees extracting nectar from the flowers.    The relationship between the flowers and the nectar-gathering bees has impressed upon the mind of the speaker the symbiotic relationship that exists in nature and that extends to the human being as an integral part of that natural scenario.

    But the speaker now holds her request of the Divine Creator until she has described her own situation, her own participation in the drama that she has created in the garden of her mind, heart, and soul.  

    Her poetic garden contains multitudes, and the ability to grow metaphorical, metaphysical flowers, bees, human hands remains her greatest challenge and strongest ability.

    Fourth Movement:  The Metaphysical Garden of Verse

    Will idle lie – in Auburn –
    Then take my flowers – pray!

    That human hand that pauses does so to continue its construction of her own metaphysical, poetic creation—that original garden into which she had early on invited her brother to visit.  

    After that hand becomes “idle,” it will cease creating those metaphysical flowers and those metaphysical bees.   Therefore, the speaker then demands of the Belovèd “Sir” that He “take [her] flowers”—adding for emphasis, “pray!”  

    After the speaker herself has ceased blooming and flying beyond the sun and pausing from the labor of metaphorical, metaphysical garden creation, her physical form will exist like a bug in amber and become unresponsive and “lie – in Auburn.”   Thus, the clever speaker is requesting through a strong demand that the Divine Gardener accept her metaphysical flowers.  

    Such a demand may seem infinitely cheeky of a mere created child of the Master Creator of the Cosmos, but the speaker has demonstrated repeatedly that she remains steadfast in her devotion and confident in her ability to create flowers—offerings—that are acceptable to a most discriminating Divine Creator.

  • Al Gore’s “One thin September soon”

    Image:  Steven F. Hayward: Exposed! The global warming campaign enters its emperor’s-new-clothes phase.

    Al Gore’s “One thin September soon”

    Climate change alarmist Al Gore joked to his publisher that W. B. Yeats had penned the so-called poem “One thin September soon” in Gore’s latest book; sadly, the publisher seemed to fall for it, before Gore admitted to scribbling it.

    Introduction with Text of “One thin September soon”

    The former vice-president’s untitled piece appears in his book, Our Choice: A Plan to Solve the Climate Crisis, which purportedly offers the antidote to “global warming.”   Al Gore’s untitled verse is chopped up into seven three-line sets, which may charitably be labeled tercets. 

    In this farcical piece of doggerel, the AGW (anthropogenic global warming) fanatic has his speaker pontificate from the position of a shepherd, who is crying to the world about the impending doom that human mankind is bringing on the world through the use of fossil fuels. 

    Through his many pontifications and written tracts on the politically fabricated issue of global warming, the former failed presidential candidate shows that he fancies himself a kind of modern-day John-the-Baptist crying in the wilderness, which is growing hotter and drier year after year, despite the fact that there has been no “warming” since the mid-1990s [1].

    And now temperatures have actually started to cool [2], according to official NASA global temperature data.

    Never mind the inconvenient facts, Gore heralds his speaker to bark loudly about the concocted problem and to offer his saintly wisdom in his untitled “poem”—wonder when Gore will publish a collection of his poetry.  Likely, never.  It seems that the political gasbag has penned only one “poem” which barely qualifies as doggerel.

    One thin September soon

    One thin September soon
    A floating continent disappears
    In midnight sun

    Vapors rise as
    Fever settles on an acid sea
    Neptune’s bones dissolve

    Snow glides from the mountain
    Ice fathers floods for a season
    A hard rain comes quickly

    Then dirt is parched
    Kindling is placed in the forest
    For the lightning’s celebration

    Unknown creatures
    Take their leave, unmourned
    Horsemen ready their stirrups

    Passion seeks heroes and friends
    The bell of the city
    On the hill is rung

    The shepherd cries
    The hour of choosing has arrived
    Here are your tools


    Video:  Al Gore Reads “One thin September soon”  

    Image:  Polar Bears on Ice Cap (Justin Hofman/Barcroft Media/Landov)

    Commentary on “One thin September soon”

    Supposedly well read in scientific literature, climate alarmist Al Gore gets the science of the Earth wrong as he has his speaker claim to be “crying in the wilderness” like some modern day John-the-Climate-Change-Baptist.

    First Tercet: Beginning with a Fantasy

    One thin September soon
    A floating continent disappears
    In midnight sun

    Gore’s speaker begins his piece by asserting that soon one of these Septembers—and it will be a “thin” September, not like the usual thick Septembers—the midnight sun will embrace the disappearance of a continent that floats.

    This first assertion presents several problems:

    1. it must be referring only to the continents at the Earth’s extreme north and south;
    2. floating continents [3]  exist only in fantasy [4],
    3. he has to be referring to Antarctica because the Arctic is not a continent at all;
    4. the midnight sun refers to a phenomenon that occurs in summer at each pole when the sun does not set.

    For the midnight sun reference, the speaker has to be referring to the non-continent Arctic because he names the month of September. There is midnight sun in the first three weeks of September at the North Pole but not at the South, whose summer is from December 22 to March 21.

    This confusion of poles gets the verse off to an inauspicious start. 

    On the one hand, the reader might remember that the composer of this pigswill is a man who is supposedly steeped in scientific studies in support of his global warming theory; yet, he engages a non-scientific fantasy and confuses the facts regarding activities at the Earth’s poles.

    On the other hand, if one considers Gore’s academic accomplishment in the study of science —”According to his Harvard transcript, he earned a D in natural science his sophomore year”—[5], his error-prone nonsense makes perfect sense.

    Second Tercet: The Conundrum of Postmodern Claptrap

    Vapors rise as
    Fever settles on an acid sea
    Neptune’s bones dissolve

    According to global warming proponents, ocean waters are becoming acidic because of the lethal effects that the warming is having on various sea creatures, including coral and urchins. Gore’s speaker refers to these sea creatures as Neptune’s bones that are dissolving.

    The absurd conflation of the bones of a mythological god and sea creatures bends the piece to the frowziness of postmodernism, where nothing matters because nothing makes sense anyway.  Yet this man of hard science wants to influence politicians and governments to make policies that will affect all citizens worldwide.

    Third Tercet: A Pile of Images

    Snow glides from the mountain
    Ice fathers floods for a season
    A hard rain comes quickly

    Because of the warming, snows begin to loosen and slide down mountains while melting ice gluts the ocean, and then the rains begin, those horrid rains! And they are “hard” [6] rains—recall that other noted poetaster/plagiarist Bob Dylan [7].

    The politician-cum-poetaster then makes those three claims of the melting that the earth is enduring: all obviously caused by the heat, all slapped together without punctuation or conjunction, possibly because everything is happening almost simultaneously. As the snow and ice suddenly become a hard rain, the reader might then suspect the prompt need of an ark.

    Fourth Tercet: As Lightning Celebrates

    Then dirt is parched
    Kindling is placed in the forest
    For the lightning’s celebration

    However, the next scene takes the reader to dry land where dirt is parched, and out of the blue, someone has placed small slips of wood in a forest where lightning can catch them to flame as it celebrates.

    The doggerelist does not reveal who placed that “[k]indling” in the forest so that lightning could set it aflame for its celebration. Why, one might wonder, would lightning be “celebrating” anyway? But by now the gentle reader has become aware that taking anything in this piece seriously is a fool’s errand.

    Fifth Tercet: Getting Ready for the Apocalypse

    Unknown creatures
    Take their leave, unmourned
    Horsemen ready their stirrups

    There are many species of animals on Antarctica, but Gore’s speaker chooses to claim that they are unknown as they “[t]ake their leave.”  It seems that such a situation would merit some drama, instead of the faint, euphemistic “take their leave.” 

    But then they are unmourned. He, no doubt, would at least have them be mourned, despite their being unknown.  Perhaps the most bizarre and useless line in the entire piece is, “Horsemen ready their stirrups.” There seems to be no reason for that line, for it connects to nothing. 

    And if the bizarre notion of an allusion to the “Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse” springs to mind, it will offer no resolution of any kind. The Book of Revelation has suffered many absurd interpretations, and if Gore’s speaker is attempting to add another, it results in the lamest of the lame.

    Sixth Tercet: A Gorean City on the Hill

    Passion seeks heroes and friends
    The bell of the city
    On the hill is rung

    The brave shepherd is passionately seeking others who will help him get his message out, that the earth is becoming a scorched, iceless dustbowl with the oceans rising. The speaker/shepherd now credits himself for ringing that all important bell in that all important place—that “city / On the hill.” The solipsism of this piece is nausea invoking.  

    Could the city on the hill be that same place to which President Ronald Reagan [8] referred?

    A troubled and afflicted mankind looks to us, pleading for us to keep our rendezvous with destiny; that we will uphold the principles of self-reliance, self-discipline, morality, and, above all, responsible liberty for every individual that we will become that shining city on a hill.

    It is likely that Gore’s speaker does, in fact, refer to that same place, but for very different reasons, for the policies thus far suggested to stop global warming would stifle the individualism and freedom of all world citizens, especially those in Third-World nations.

    Seventh Tercet: The Shepherd Handing Over the Tools

    The shepherd cries
    The hour of choosing has arrived
    Here are your tools

    In the final three-line set, Gore’s speaker reports that he, as this good crying shepherd, is telling his listeners that the time for action is at hand, and he has hereby come to hand to them all the tools they need.

    This self-important, junk-science spewing “shepherd” is offering in his new book the necessary “tools” that his sheep will need as they waddle with him down this fantastical path to an Earth-saving global temperature. Whatever that is?

    (Please note: On Amazon, Fredrick P. Wilson, in his comment, “Ugly, Economically Disastrous, Green Choices,” offers a useful review of Gore’s book, Our Choice: A Plan to Solve the Climate Crisis.)

    Sources

    [1]  Prof. Don J. Easterbrook. “Global Cooling is Here.” Global Research. November 2, 2008.

    [2] Aaron Brown.  “Did You Know the Greatest Two-Year Global Cooling Event Just Took Place?”  RealClear Markets.  April 24, 2018.

    [3]  Dr. Christopher S. Baird.  “What keeps the continents floating on a sea of molten rock?”  Science Questions with Surprising Answers.  July 18, 2013.

    [4]  TV-Tropes: The All Devouring Pop-Culture Wiki.  “Floating Continent.”  Accessed November 20, 2023.

    [5]  College Fix Staff.  “Al Gore, Climate ‘Expert’, Bombed Science in College.”  The College Fix.  April 30, 2012.

    [6]   Bob Dylan.  “A Hard Rain’s a-Gonna Fall.”  Genius.  Accessed November 20, 2023.

    [7]  Sean MichaelsBob Dylan is ‘a Plagiarist’, claims Joni Mitchell.”  The Guardian.  April 23, 2010.

    [8] Ronald Reagan.  “Shining City on a Hill” – 1988 State of the Union .

    Image:  Al Gore – PoliNation Blog – Science 

    Video:  Excellent Lampoon of Gore’s Doggerel