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Author: Linda Sue Grimes

  • My Onions, My Opinions

    269a Image created by ChatGPTinspired by the poem
    Image created by ChatGPTinspired by the poem

    My Onions, My Opinions

    “Understand therefore, that the LORD thy God giveth thee not this good land to possess it for thy righteousness.  For thou art a stiffnecked people.”  Deut. 9:6

    When Auden said,About suffering they were never wrong, 
    The Old Masters
    ,” he meant my parents.
    They went about it loud and long.
    My mother lost her father when she was twenty,
    married mine when she was twenty-one
    & practiced a vinegar tongue.
    He cursed the weather and my attitude.
    But they knew how to grow a garden.

    When my husband plants onions, he doesn’t set
    them deep enough.  They sit there growing
    like little pots sticking out of the ground.  That’s wrong.
    They need to grow deep in the earth.  So later when you
    pull up a green onion, the useless layers
    sluff off.

    I never knew how they worshiped,
    I never knew if they prayed.
    I sat on the floor cross-legged like an Indian 
    but as stiffnecked as an Israelite.
    I do, however, plant onions right.

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “Dorcas Gustine”

    Image: Edgar Lee Masters https://chicagoliteraryhof.org/inductees/profile/edgar-lee-masters
    Image: Edgar Lee Masters – Chicago Literary Hall of Fame

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Dorcas Gustine”

    Dorcas Gustine did not let any grievance go unchallenged, and her post-mortem pride is displayed in her report from beyond the grave.  As in the other epitaphs, Dorcas’ report is actually airing a grievance as it disparages the behavior and thinking of others.

    Introduction and Text of  “Dorcas Gustine”

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Dorcas Gustine” from the poet’s American classic Spoon River Anthology is an American sonnet which dramatizes the thoughts of a strong-willed character.  Dorcas reports that she defended herself against wrongs, or perhaps perceived wrongs, and thereby was “not beloved of the villagers.”

    Because Dorcas Gustine felt great pride in her behavior of not allowing any grievance to go unchallenged, she now displays that post-mortem pride in her revealing report from beyond the grave.

    Dorcas Gustine

    I was not beloved of the villagers,
    But all because I spoke my mind,
    And met those who transgressed against me
    With plain remonstrance, hiding nor nurturing  
    Nor secret griefs nor grudges.
    That act of the Spartan boy is greatly praised,  
    Who hid the wolf under his cloak,  
    Letting it devour him, uncomplainingly.  
    It is braver, I think, to snatch the wolf forth
    And fight him openly, even in the street,
    Amid dust and howls of pain.
    The tongue may be an unruly member—  
    But silence poisons the soul.
    Berate me who will—I am content.

    Commentary on“Dorcas Gustine”

    Dorcas Gustine did not let any grievance go unchallenged, and her post-mortem pride is displayed in her report from beyond the grave.

    First Movement:   Not Well Liked

    I was not beloved of the villagers,
    But all because I spoke my mind,
    And met those who transgressed against me
    With plain remonstrance, hiding nor nurturing  
    Nor secret griefs nor grudges.

    The speaker Dorcas Gustine begins her monologue by asserting that the villagers of Spoon River did not particularly care for her.  She then offers her belief that they did not like her because she “spoke [her] mind.”   

    Dorcas did not allow any transgression against her to go unchallenged.  She calls her self-defense “plain remonstrance,” which implies that she is certain that she was simply defending herself with honesty.  

    Because of Dorcas’ habit of meeting every slight with a response, she declares that she was, therefore, able to go about without concealing those griefs, which she did not allow to grow in “secret,” nor did she keep her grudges hidden.

    What Dorcas does not seem to realize is that her failure to nurse secret griefs and grudges did not translate positively by the other villagers; she likely felt that airing each disaffection should be a healthy act.

    Second Movement:   Allusion to Plutarch

    That act of the Spartan boy is greatly praised,  
    Who hid the wolf under his cloak,  
    Letting it devour him, uncomplainingly.  

    Dorcas alludes to Plutarch’s tale of the Spartan boy who, to avoid detection, held a baby wolf—which is a fox in Plutarch’s telling—under his garment, and even though the wolf gnawed into the boy’s stomach, he did not grimace.  

    Dorcas does not realize the irony of her allusion.  The Spartan boy’s act demonstrated his severe training in conquering pain, while Dorcas demonstrates a self-involved attitude that will not accept pain or any discomfort.

    Third Movement:  An Open Fight

    It is braver, I think, to snatch the wolf forth
    And fight him openly, even in the street,
    Amid dust and howls of pain.

    Dorcas then explains that she finds the braver act “to snatch the wolf forth / And fight him openly.”  But such an act for the Spartan boy would have demonstrated weakness, as the boy explained,  ” . . . better to die without yielding to the pain than through being detected because of weakness of spirit to gain a life to be lived in disgrace.”

    Dorcas’ idea of bravery differs greatly from that of the Spartan boy.  Dorcas found that she had to remove the source of her consternation immediately.  She had no patience and probably felt herself superior to those who would “remonstrate” against her.

    Fourth Movement:  Not Content

    The tongue may be an unruly member—  
    But silence poisons the soul.
    Berate me who will—I am content.

    Dorcas concludes by admitting that “the tongue may be an unruly member,” but despite that unruliness, she believes holding one’s tongue is poisonous, that is, “silence poisons the soul.”  Dorcas then calls for those who disagree with her to “berate [her]” if they choose, and concludes by stating that she is “content.”

    The reader never discovers how Dorcas Gustine died.  That she is providing a post-mortem report, however, belies her claim that she is content.    As the reader has discovered from all the other deceased reporters, none can be thought to be content.  All of them display some grievance or strongly held tie to their former lives that they wish to share.

  • August

    Image created by Grok inspired by the poem
    Image created by Grok inspired by the poem

    August 

    Moon of the Black Cherries

    Stretched out like this on the sand,
    my body browns, 
    while my mind circles around
    your moon and the browning of cornstalks.
    These ears have listened all summer 
    to my Indiana garden.

    Now they absorb the sweet roar of the Pacific.

    You opened school and closed summer vacation, 
    and too soon snow slickened the roads 
    and made that big yellow bus
    that hauled me to school slide and threaten
    to slip off into the water down River Road.

    But now I know you are as fair as April 
    who promises flowers and warm skin
    but sometimes delivers a blow
    that crashes houses and sucks up trees
    before keeping those promises.

    Black cherries are the sweet ones.

  • A Bright Charm

    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem
    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem

    A Bright Charm

    His squeal was not at all 
    As pathetic as the barnyard pig
    Whose blood jets propelled
    That old expression, “bled like a stuck hog”—
    He bled beautifully, just the right color 
    And sticky-sweet texture she expected from him
    And his flesh shucked off those bones easy
    And clean as pulling his t-shirt right off his back.
    His plump rump slid off as easy as his white cotton 
    Undies.  His joints unhooked quick as any brassiere 
    She ever shucked.

    Standing ankle-deep in guts
    She marveled at the cooperation
    Of the sum of his parts,
    They seemed to want to be put asunder.

    Still, she’s truly sorry it had to end that way—
    She’d rather his tongue be sliding over hers
    Than down the gullet of those buzzards—but oh well,
    His cherubic face glowing like the moon 
    Is a bright charm dangling from her bracelet of old lovers.

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “The Town Marshal” and “Jack McGuire”

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    Image: Edgar Lee Masters

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “The Town Marshal” and “Jack McGuire”

    In Edgar Lee Masters’ “The Town Marshal,” a man named Logan is hired by prohibitionists. Logan meets his demise because of his bullying personality.  In “Jack McGuire,” the protagonist escapes a lynch mob, and more is learned about the marshal he shot.

    Introduction and Text of “The Town Marshal”

    The epitaph “The Town Marshal” is followed in the sequence by “Jack McGuire” in Edgar Lee Masters’ American classic Spoon River Anthology.  The two need to be read together in order to get the total essence of the marshal’s personality, as well as his name.

    Logan, the town marshal, speaks in “The Town Marshal.” Although he remains nameless in his own poem, he is called “Logan” in the companion piece, “Jack McGuire.”   Marshal Logan, who was hired by prohibitionists,  is killed because he was a bully, but in the final analysis, he can be credited with admitting his fatal flaw.

    The Town Marshal

    The prohibitionists made me Town Marshal
    When the saloons were voted out,
    Because when I was a drinking man,  
    Before I joined the church, I killed a Swede  
    At the saw-mill near Maple Grove.
    And they wanted a terrible man,
    Grim, righteous, strong, courageous,
    And a hater of saloons and drinkers,
    To keep law and order in the village.
    And they presented me with a loaded cane
    With which I struck Jack McGuire  
    Before he drew the gun with which he killed me.
    The Prohibitionists spent their money in vain
    To hang him, for in a dream
    I appeared to one of the twelve jurymen
    And told him the whole secret story.
    Fourteen years were enough for killing me.

    Commentary on “The Town Marshal”

    The town marshal, hired by prohibitionists, is a man named Logan, who meets his demise because of his bullying personality.

    First Movement:  Marshal by Prohibition

    The prohibitionists made me Town Marshal
    When the saloons were voted out,
    Because when I was a drinking man,  
    Before I joined the church, I killed a Swede  
    At the saw-mill near Maple Grove.

    Logan begins by reporting that he became town marshal because of prohibition.  He had been “a drinking man” and had once “killed a Swede,” before he “joined the church.”  Logan’s reputation seemed to lend itself to the kind of individual the prohibitionists wanted to enlist to enforce the new statute. 

    Logan’s grating, obnoxious personality is that of a braggadocio, who is not shy about tooting his own horn.  His assessment of the conclusion of the trial of the man who shot him demonstrates this trait.

    Second Movement:  A Strong Anti-Boozer

    And they wanted a terrible man,
    Grim, righteous, strong, courageous,
    And a hater of saloons and drinkers,
    To keep law and order in the village.

    Logan explains that prohibitionists wanted a strong, anti-booze man who was “a terrible 

    man, / Grim, righteous, strong, courageous, / And a hater of saloons and drinkers.” Logan, no doubt, sees himself as his “terrible man,” who could “keep law and order in the village.” Again, the town marshal shows the high estimation he has of himself.  His strong sense of self-accomplishment motivates his actions.

    Third Movement:   Armed with a Loaded Cane

    And they presented me with a loaded cane
    With which I struck Jack McGuire  
    Before he drew the gun with which he killed me.

    Logan reveals that the prohibitionists armed him with “a loaded cane,” that is, a walking-stick that contains lead in one end, which renders it a legal weapon.   Quickly, the marshal cuts to the heart of the matter, stating that he struck Jack McGuire with this loaded cane just before McGuire pulled a gun and shot Logan dead.

    The details of the encounter with McGuire are recounted in McGuire’s testimony, the poem that follows “The Town Marshal” in the Spoon River Anthology.   After the reader is apprised of those details, Logan’s personality becomes clearer.

    Fourth Movement:  Fourteen Years instead of Hanging

    The Prohibitionists spent their money in vain
    To hang him, for in a dream
    I appeared to one of the twelve jurymen
    And told him the whole secret story.
    Fourteen years were enough for killing me.

    Logan boastfully takes credit for McGuire’s receiving a sentence of only fourteen years, despite the fact that the prohibitionists “spent their money in vain” trying to get McGuire to swing at the end of a rope.  

    Marshal Logan claims that he visited one of the jurymen in a dream and told him the whole sordid tale about how he was shot. The story vindicates McGuire, at least, enough so that hanging was not the recommended punishment.  

    Thus McGuire was sentenced to only fourteen years, and Logan feels that that punishment is appropriate.   At least, Logan does finally recognize himself as a bully and wants to see justice prevail.

    Edgar Lee Masters - Commemorative Stamp
    Image: Edgar Lee Masters – Commemorative Stamp

    Introduction and Text of “Jack McGuire”

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Jack McGuire” from his American classic Spoon River Anthology is a companion piece to “The Town Marshal.”   In this epitaph “Jack McGuire,” the reader learns more about Logan, the town marshal, in addition to Logan’s “The Town Marshal” soliloquy.

    Jack McGuire

    They would have lynched me
    Had I not been secretly hurried away
    To the jail at Peoria.
    And yet I was going peacefully home,
    Carrying my jug, a little drunk,
    When Logan, the marshal, halted me,
    Called me a drunken hound and shook me,
    And, when I cursed him for it, struck me
    With that Prohibition loaded cane—
    All this before I shot him.
    They would have hanged me except for this:
    My lawyer, Kinsey Keene, was helping to land
    Old Thomas Rhodes for wrecking the bank,
    And the judge was a friend of Rhodes
    And wanted him to escape,
    And Kinsey offered to quit on Rhodes
    For fourteen years for me.
    And the bargain was made. I served my time
    And learned to read and write.


    Commentary on “Jack McGuire”

    Jack McGuire escapes a lynch mob, and more is learned about the marshal he shot.

    First Movement:  Potential Lynch Mob

    They would have lynched me
    Had I not been secretly hurried away
    To the jail at Peoria.

    Jack begins by reporting the startling news that he would have been hanged by a lynch mob, if he had not been “secretly hurried away / To the jail in Peoria.”   Jack then implies that his deed in Spoon River had worked up a number of folks who were ready to administer vigilante justice. this is, without a proper trial.

    Second Movement: Minding His Own Business

    And yet I was going peacefully home,
    Carrying my jug, a little drunk,
    When Logan, the marshal, halted me,
    Called me a drunken hound and shook me,

    Jack explains that he was minding his own business, “going peacefully home,” when he was accosted by “Logan, the marshal.”  Jack admits that he was “a little drunk” and that he was “carrying [his] jug” on his way home.

    But Logan, who was employed by the prohibitionists to enforce the ban on booze in Spoon River, stopped Jack and bullied him, calling him “a drunken hound.”  In his bullying fashion, Logan also invaded Jack’s personal space and “shook him.”

    Third Movement:  Violent Confrontation 

    And, when I cursed him for it, struck me
    With that Prohibition loaded cane—
    All this before I shot him.

    Jack reacted to Logan’s harassment by swearing at the marshal.  Logan then struck Jack with his “Prohibition loaded cane.”  Jack responded by drawing out his gun and shooting the marshal dead.

    Fourth Movement:  Avoiding Hanging

    They would have hanged me except for this:
    My lawyer, Kinsey Keene, was helping to land
    Old Thomas Rhodes for wrecking the bank,
    And the judge was a friend of Rhodes
    And wanted him to escape,
    And Kinsey offered to quit on Rhodes
    For fourteen years for me.

    Jack explains how he avoided the gallows, and his explanation differs from Logan’s.  Jack’s lawyer, Kinsey Keene, was also the counsel against “Old Thomas Rhodes” who was charged with “wrecking the bank.”  The judge in Jack’s case was a friend of Rhodes’ and wanted Rhodes to be acquitted.  So Jack’s lawyer Keene “offered to quit on Rhodes / For fourteen years for me.”

    The reader will recall that Logan interpreted the fourteen-year sentence very differently; Logan claimed that he appeared to a juryman in a dream and revealed his complicity in his own death, and that resulted in the short sentence for Jack.  

    Fifth Movement:  So He Learns to Read and Write

    And the bargain was made. I served my time
    And learned to read and write.

    Jack says he served his term and “learned to read and write.”  Jack, of course, knows nothing about Logan’s claim to have appeared in a dream to the juryman.   And Logan could not have known about the deal struck between the judge and Keene. 

    This disconnect opens up a fascinating arena for the evaluation of the worth of each man’s story.  While the reader accepts Jack’s version as probably the correct one, the reader cannot with certainty discount Logan’s version.

    A bitter irony prevails, however, that Jack, who actually took the life a fellow human being—as opposed to merely being a bully, as Logan was—appears to be the one who came out the winner; not only was his sentence light, but he also learned to read and write to boot.

  • The Eyes of the Pumpkin

    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem
    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem

    The Eyes of the Pumpkin

    The candle soots the roof of my skull,  
    this cap carved out of the top of my head,
    sitting on a slab staring at begging children
    whose greedy bags rustle the end of October.

    My memory of harvest  
    is a snap of the umbilical,  
    now a tufted handle of decay.

    The candle, feigning a brain,
    has flickered evening away;
    thoughts set in wax
    on the floor of my mouth —
    the last child has rustled the leaves

    all sweets are given away,   
    my eyes black holes.

  • Emily Dickinson’s “If I should cease to bring a Rose”

    Image: Emily Dickinson - Amherst College - Daguerrotype of the poet at age 17, circa 1847 - likely the only authentic, extant likeness of the poet
    Image: Emily Dickinson – Amherst College – Daguerrotype of the poet at age 17, circa 1847 – likely the only authentic, extant likeness of the poet

    Emily Dickinson’s “If I should cease to bring a Rose”

    The speaker in Emily Dickinson’s “If I should cease to bring a Rose” asserts that only death can prevent her small acts of tribute and remembrance.

    Introduction and Text of “If I should cease to bring a Rose”

    Emily Dickinson’s “If I should cease to bring a Rose” thematically sections into two balanced stanzas. The speaker contemplates the only force that could interrupt her customary offerings of a rose on festival days and her naming of commemorative buds.

    On the literal level the speaker announces that absence from these gentle rituals will signal her departure beyond earthly flowers. Paramahansa Yogananda explains that our real self, the soul, is immortal and that death is only an experience through which one learns one cannot die.

    If I should cease to bring a Rose

    If I should cease to bring a Rose
    Upon a festal day,
    ‘Twill be because beyond the Rose
    I have been called away –


    If I should cease to take the names
    My buds commemorate –
    ‘Twill be because Death’s finger
    Claps my murmuring lip!

    Commentary on “If I should cease to bring a Rose”

    The speaker calmly names death as the sole cause that would end her quiet gestures of remembrance and tribute.

    First Stanza: “If I should cease to bring a Rose”

    If I should cease to bring a Rose
    Upon a festal day,
    ‘Twill be because beyond the Rose
    I have been called away –

    The speaker opens with a conditional statement about ending the gift of a rose on a festival day. Such a cessation would not arise from forgetfulness or indifference.  The reason rests solely in her having been summoned beyond the rose itself.

    The flower stands as the last earthly token she might offer.  In my earlier essays on Dickinsonian poems, I have discussed the speaker’s habit of treating death as a quiet summons rather than a violent rupture.

    The phrase “called away” softens the departure into an invitation issued from a realm past physical blossoms. Contemplative musing reveals the speaker’s quiet certainty that only this call could silence her ritual.  Paramahansa Yogananda explains that the soul merely sleeps a little while in the change called death yet remains eternally existing.

    Second Stanza: “If I should cease to take the names”

    If I should cease to take the names
    My buds commemorate –
    ‘Twill be because Death’s finger
    Claps my murmuring lip!

    The speaker next considers the naming of buds that keep memory alive. Should that naming stop, the cause would again be death alone.  Death’s finger is pictured as gently closing the lip that still murmurs names. The image remains tender rather than harsh.

    In my earlier essays on Dickinsonian poems, I have discussed the speaker’s steady focus on immortality as the true condition of the soul.The final image seals the poem with quiet finality. Only the touch of death can still the voice that once spoke the commemorative names.

  • Greek Skin

    Greek Skin 

    for my mother’s father, Gus Johnson

    In a Kentucky coal mine he fell across the track
    and a loaded coal car cut off his right arm.

    This world offers no shelter to nervous pilgrims; 
    this world takes a dim view of pain even as it inflicts it, 
    as if some people were meant to starve, 
    as if some people were meant to speak 
    English with a Greek accent, 
    but my mother loved him so much that his death
    became her deepest grief, and when she crossed
    the bridge that connects this world with his, I hope
    he met and greeted her with both arms,
    he won’t let her fall through a hole in the sky, will he? 
    And though he never had the chance to speak
    a word to me, I think he must have been a multitude
    of races and climates, my blood senses his Greek skin
    was tinged with Africa, my mother’s darkness
    and my father’s whiteness left me an odd shade of gray.
    It’s not so much confusion as an unwillingness to pray—
    Yet many fold their hands when trees lash in the violent air.

    But if he knew my concern, he could wipe from my mind 
    the dust that blew in from faraway places 
    where they cut down all the trees 
    and cut off the hands of innocent thieves
    and Greek slaves slaughtered each other
    to entertain a Roman tyrant.

  • Emily Dickinson’s “By Chivalries as tiny”

    Image: Emily Dickinson - Amherst College - Daguerrotype of the poet at age 17, circa 1847 - likely the only authentic, extant likeness of the poet
    Image: Emily Dickinson – Amherst College – Daguerrotype of the poet at age 17, circa 1847 – likely the only authentic, extant likeness of the poet

    Emily Dickinson’s “By Chivalries as tiny”

    In Emily Dickinson’s “By Chivalries as tiny,” the speaker advances the idea that small chivalrous acts function as spiritual seeds, planting joy that matures beyond sight. This idea aligns with the metaphysical fact that inner realities outlast outer show.

    Introduction and Text of “By Chivalries as tiny”

    Emily Dickinson’s “By Chivalries as tiny” discloses the speaker’s insight that small seemingly insignificant courtesies sow seeds of joy which later bloom unseen. The poem asserts that small gestures hold cosmic power to produce inner light.

    By Chivalries as tiny
    A Blossom, or a Book
    The seeds of smiles are planted—
    Which blossom in the dark

    Commentary on “By Chivalries as tiny”

    The speaker assets that oft-overlooked courtesies function as spiritual seeds, planting joy that matures beyond sight. This sentiment aligns with the metaphysical reality that inner realities are permanent while outer acts remain temporary..

    First Line: “By Chivalries as tiny”

    The speaker opens by foregrounding the paradox that smallness contains greatness. “Chivalries” signals courteous acts—gentle, self-forgetting gestures that honor another’s dignity without fanfare. 

    In my earlier essays on Dickinsonian poems, I have discussed the speaker’s ability to dramatize quiet virtues that the world overlooks, yet which sustain the soul’s equilibrium. Paramahansa Yogananda explains that service to others expands consciousness and kindles the soul’s joy, especially when one forgets the little self. 

    The phrase “as tiny” does not diminish value; it magnifies the mystery that divine influence often arrives through humble channels. Such acts mirror the inner light that glows when the mind grows calm and attentive. The speaker thus frames ethics as aesthetics: courtesy becomes a form of beauty that radiates beyond the moment of giving.

    Second Line: “A Blossom, or a Book”

    The second line specifies two examples of small gifts: “A Blossom, or a Book.” Both are tangible yet symbolic—nature’s fragrance and thought’s fragrance. A blossom offers sensory delight; a book offers mental illumination.

     In my earlier essays on Dickinsonian poems, I have discussed the speaker’s treatment of material objects as vessels of metaphysical meaning. Paramahansa Yogananda explains that giving opens the flow of divine abundance and blesses the instrument through which it flows. 

    The blossom signifies ephemeral beauty that nonetheless points to enduring grace; the book signifies lasting wisdom that feeds the inner life. Either gift can awaken a smile because each carries the giver’s attention and care. The speaker thus presents choice without hierarchy: both nature and art serve as conduits of joy.

    Third Line: “The seeds of smiles are planted—”

    Here the speaker shifts from object to effect.  The dash invites a pause, enacting the moment of planting before the bloom. “Seeds” implies latency; “smiles” indicates  inward gladness made visible. 

    In my earlier essays on Dickinson’s poems, I have discussed the speaker’s frequent use of agricultural imagery to map spiritual growth. Paramahansa Yogananda explains that when we think kindly of others, our consciousness expands, and a part of our being goes forth with that thought. 

    The planting is silent, yet it initiates a chain of cause that the planter may never witness. The speaker suggests that joy propagates like a living organism, rooted in the soil of the heart. Thus, courtesy becomes generative, not merely decorative.

    Fourth Line: “Which blossom in the dark”

    The closing line declares, “Which blossom in the dark,” completing the riddle of unseen fruition. “Dark” denotes privacy, night, or the interior where outer eyes cannot track growth. 

    In my earlier essays on Dickinsonian poems, I have discussed the speaker’s habit of privileging inner evidence over public display. Paramahansa Yogananda explains that the inner light awakens as the mind grows calm, becoming a home base for perception beyond the senses. 

    The speaker’s claim is audacious: what is planted in daylight may flower where no one looks. This revelation affirms a metaphysics of hidden abundance, where value accrues without applause. The poem thus ends in confidence: the soul’s garden blooms even while the world sleeps.

    Image:  Emily Dickinson - Commemorative Stamp
    Image: Emily Dickinson – Commemorative Stamp