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  • Alfred, Lord Tennyson’s “Ulysses”

    Image:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/alfred-tennyson  Poetry Foundation
    Image:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson – Poetry Foundation

    Alfred, Lord Tennyson’s “Ulysses”

    Alfred, Lord Tennyson conflated Homer’s character with that of Dante’s to speak to his own difficulty of facing life after the death of his dear friend Arthur Hallam.

    Introduction and Text of  “Ulysses”

    Tennyson’s “Ulysses” features three unrimed blank verse paragraphs (versagraphs). Tennyson’s “Ulysses” dramatizes the theme of struggling to face life after living through a cataclysmic experience.

    About his poem, Tennyson has explained, “Ulysses was written soon after Arthur Hallam’s death, and gave my feeling about the need of going forward, and braving the struggle of life perhaps more simply than anything in ‘In Memoriam’.”

    Ulysses

    It little profits that an idle king,
    By this still hearth, among these barren crags,
    Match’d with an aged wife, I mete and dole
    Unequal laws unto a savage race,
    That hoard, and sleep, and feed, and know not me.
    I cannot rest from travel: I will drink
    Life to the lees: All times I have enjoy’d
    Greatly, have suffer’d greatly, both with those
    That loved me, and alone, on shore, and when
    Thro’ scudding drifts the rainy Hyades
    Vext the dim sea: I am become a name;
    For always roaming with a hungry heart
    Much have I seen and known; cities of men
    And manners, climates, councils, governments,
    Myself not least, but honour’d of them all;
    And drunk delight of battle with my peers,
    Far on the ringing plains of windy Troy.
    I am a part of all that I have met;
    Yet all experience is an arch wherethro’
    Gleams that untravell’d world whose margin fades
    For ever and forever when I move.
    How dull it is to pause, to make an end,
    To rust unburnish’d, not to shine in use!
    As tho’ to breathe were life! Life piled on life
    Were all too little, and of one to me
    Little remains: but every hour is saved
    From that eternal silence, something more,
    A bringer of new things; and vile it were
    For some three suns to store and hoard myself,
    And this gray spirit yearning in desire
    To follow knowledge like a sinking star,
    Beyond the utmost bound of human thought. 

             This is my son, mine own Telemachus,
    To whom I leave the sceptre and the isle,—
    Well-loved of me, discerning to fulfil
    This labour, by slow prudence to make mild
    A rugged people, and thro’ soft degrees
    Subdue them to the useful and the good.
    Most blameless is he, centred in the sphere
    Of common duties, decent not to fail
    In offices of tenderness, and pay
    Meet adoration to my household gods,
    When I am gone. He works his work, I mine. 

             There lies the port; the vessel puffs her sail:
    There gloom the dark, broad seas. My mariners,
    Souls that have toil’d, and wrought, and thought with me—
    That ever with a frolic welcome took
    The thunder and the sunshine, and opposed
    Free hearts, free foreheads—you and I are old;
    Old age hath yet his honour and his toil;
    Death closes all: but something ere the end,
    Some work of noble note, may yet be done,
    Not unbecoming men that strove with Gods.
    The lights begin to twinkle from the rocks:
    The long day wanes: the slow moon climbs: the deep
    Moans round with many voices. Come, my friends,
    ‘T is not too late to seek a newer world.
    Push off, and sitting well in order smite
    The sounding furrows; for my purpose holds
    To sail beyond the sunset, and the baths
    Of all the western stars, until I die.
    It may be that the gulfs will wash us down:
    It may be we shall touch the Happy Isles,
    And see the great Achilles, whom we knew.
    Tho’ much is taken, much abides; and tho’
    We are not now that strength which in old days
    Moved earth and heaven, that which we are, we are;
    One equal temper of heroic hearts,
    Made weak by time and fate, but strong in will
    To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.

    Reading

    Commentary on “Ulysses”

    Alfred, Lord Tennyson conflated Homer’s character with that of Dante’s to speak to his own difficulty of facing life after the death of his dear friend, Arthur Hallam.

    First Versagraph:  The Value of an Idle Life

    It little profits that an idle king,
    By this still hearth, among these barren crags,
    Match’d with an aged wife, I mete and dole
    Unequal laws unto a savage race,
    That hoard, and sleep, and feed, and know not me.
    I cannot rest from travel: I will drink
    Life to the lees: All times I have enjoy’d
    Greatly, have suffer’d greatly, both with those
    That loved me, and alone, on shore, and when
    Thro’ scudding drifts the rainy Hyades
    Vext the dim sea: I am become a name;
    For always roaming with a hungry heart
    Much have I seen and known; cities of men
    And manners, climates, councils, governments,
    Myself not least, but honour’d of them all;
    And drunk delight of battle with my peers,
    Far on the ringing plains of windy Troy.
    I am a part of all that I have met;
    Yet all experience is an arch wherethro’
    Gleams that untravell’d world whose margin fades
    For ever and forever when I move.
    How dull it is to pause, to make an end,
    To rust unburnish’d, not to shine in use!
    As tho’ to breathe were life! Life piled on life
    Were all too little, and of one to me
    Little remains: but every hour is saved
    From that eternal silence, something more,
    A bringer of new things; and vile it were
    For some three suns to store and hoard myself,
    And this gray spirit yearning in desire
    To follow knowledge like a sinking star,
    Beyond the utmost bound of human thought. 

    In the first versagraph, the speaker, Ulysses, the Roman counterpart of the Greek “Odysseus,” complains that his life as “an idle king” is not worth much.  The speaker’s activity consists of administering justice to the citizens who do not even understand him. All they are interested in is sleeping and eating. 

    Second Versagraph:   The Habit of Travel

    This is my son, mine own Telemachus,
    To whom I leave the sceptre and the isle,—
    Well-loved of me, discerning to fulfil
    This labour, by slow prudence to make mild
    A rugged people, and thro’ soft degrees
    Subdue them to the useful and the good.
    Most blameless is he, centred in the sphere
    Of common duties, decent not to fail
    In offices of tenderness, and pay
    Meet adoration to my household gods,
    When I am gone. He works his work, I mine.

    The habit of “travel” has become such a great part of the speaker’s life that he finds he is unable to rehabituate himself to a settled existence.  The speaker then catalogues the events and feelings that have kept him occupied most of his life during his adventures. 

    While traveling, he became “a name” “roaming with a hungry heart.”  The speaker reports, “Much have I seen and known; cities of men / And manners, climates, councils, governments, / Myself not least, but honoured of them all.” 

    Compared to the excitement of the traveling life, settling down with an “aged wife” and trying to govern a territory seem dull and unsatisfying.  Although he has been back from his odyssey for only three years, the speaker yearns to be able to set sail again: “How dull it is to pause, to make an end, / To rust unburnished, not to shine in use!” 

    Third Versagraph:  A Strong Will

    There lies the port; the vessel puffs her sail:
    There gloom the dark, broad seas. My mariners,
    Souls that have toil’d, and wrought, and thought with me—
    That ever with a frolic welcome took
    The thunder and the sunshine, and opposed
    Free hearts, free foreheads—you and I are old;
    Old age hath yet his honour and his toil;
    Death closes all: but something ere the end,
    Some work of noble note, may yet be done,
    Not unbecoming men that strove with Gods.
    The lights begin to twinkle from the rocks:
    The long day wanes: the slow moon climbs: the deep
    Moans round with many voices. Come, my friends,
    ‘T is not too late to seek a newer world.
    Push off, and sitting well in order smite
    The sounding furrows; for my purpose holds
    To sail beyond the sunset, and the baths
    Of all the western stars, until I die.
    It may be that the gulfs will wash us down:
    It may be we shall touch the Happy Isles,
    And see the great Achilles, whom we knew.
    Tho’ much is taken, much abides; and tho’
    We are not now that strength which in old days
    Moved earth and heaven, that which we are, we are;
    One equal temper of heroic hearts,
    Made weak by time and fate, but strong in will
    To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.

    In the third versagraph, Ulysses introduces his son, Telemachus. He describes his son as decent and capable of fulfilling the role Ulysses now fills.   And the speaker makes it clear that he would prefer his son take over his governing responsibilities, so that he can continue his swashbuckling world-wide adventures: “When I am gone. 

    He works his work, I mine.”  The speaker then claims that in the harbor his ships are ready. And although he and his sailors are old, “Some work of noble note, may yet be done.” 

    For the men who fought very great odds to return to their homes, the speaker avers that something useful should still be available for them accomplish.   Thus, Ulysses appeals to this sailors, “Come, my friends, / ‘Tis not too late to seek a newer world.” He insists that he still has goals to achieve and miles to travel before he is ready to give up his striving. 

    Finally, the speaker admits that he and his sailors are not as strong as they used to be “in old days,” but although they may be weaker physically, they are nevertheless “strong in will / To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.”   The speaker is convinced that they all have the spiritual strength to conquer foes, whether those adversaries be external or internal.

  • William Wordsworth’s “Surprised by Joy”

    Image:  William Wordsworth  https://www.npg.org.uk/collections/search/portrait/mw66828/William-Wordsworth - Edward McInnes - National Portrait Gallery, London
    Image:  William Wordsworth – Edward McInnes – National Portrait Gallery, London

    William Wordsworth’s “Surprised by Joy”

    In “Surprised by Joy,” the speaker’s mystic musing reveals his soul yearning; Wordsworth has revealed that the poem was urged by his deceased daughter.

    Introduction and Text of “Surprised by Joy”

    William Wordsworth has reported that this poem was “was in fact suggested by my daughter Catharine long after her death.” The poem’s mystic musing reveals the speaker’s soul craving.

    William Wordsworth’s “Surprised by joy—impatient as the Wind” is a Petrarchan sonnet with the traditional octave whose rime scheme is ABBAABBA and the traditional sestet with the rime scheme CDCDCD. The octave features two discrete quatrains and the sestet features two tercets. 

    Surprised by Joy

    Surprised by joy—impatient as the Wind
    I turned to share the transport—Oh! with whom
    But Thee, long buried in the silent Tomb,
    That spot which no vicissitude can find?
    Love, faithful love, recalled thee to my mind—
    But how could I forget thee?—Through what power,
    Even for the least division of an hour,
    Have I been so beguiled as to be blind
    To my most grievous loss!—That thought’s return
    Was the worst pang that sorrow ever bore,
    Save one, one only, when I stood forlorn,
    Knowing my heart’s best treasure was no more;
    That neither present time, nor years unborn
    Could to my sight that heavenly face restore.

    Commentary on “Surprised by Joy”  

    The speaker senses the presence of his daughter, who had died many years earlier.

    Octave First Quatrain:  The Urge to Share Joy

    Surprised by joy—impatient as the Wind
    I turned to share the transport—Oh! with whom
    But Thee, long buried in the silent Tomb,
    That spot which no vicissitude can find? 

    The speaker is animated claiming to have been “surprised by joy.” The surprise of this joy impelled him to “share the transport” with his companion.  He felt “impatient as the Wind” and unthinkingly turns to comment on his euphoria but then suddenly is brought back to the reality that the person with whom he intended to share his feeling is “deep buried in the silent tomb.” 

    Having died, his companion can no longer be accosted by the “vicissitude[s]” of the wind, the sun, or other joyful expressions of nature.   The speaker is alone in his joy, and he is then compelled to capture that odd moment when the joy had been so strong that it made him briefly forget the death and think his loved one still alive and by his side. 

    Octave Second Quatrain:  Strong Bonds Beyond the Grave

    Love, faithful love, recalled thee to my mind—
    But how could I forget thee?—Through what power,
    Even for the least division of an hour,
    Have I been so beguiled as to be blind 

    In the second quatrain of the octave, the speaker then reasons that his momentary lapse was caused by his deep “Love, faithful love”; this strong connection based on profound love heralded the departed loved one to the speaker’s mind, making him virtually feel that she indeed stood beside him as the joy swept through his being. 

    Sestet First Tercet:  Reliving Grief

    To my most grievous loss!—That thought’s return
    Was the worst pang that sorrow ever bore,
    Save one, one only, when I stood forlorn, 

    But then the speaker questions the idea implied by his brief moment of forgetfulness that he could ever forget his beloved. He asserts rhetorically through his question that no power could exert itself sufficiently to “blind” him to his “most grievous loss.” 

    The speaker then avers that having that thought of the fact that his beloved had died brought “the worst pang that sorrow ever bore.” However, he then qualifies that claim by stating that there was one—”one only”—other occasion when he had suffered such a grief. 

    Sestet Second Tercet:   Distressing Awareness

    Knowing my heart’s best treasure was no more;
    That neither present time, nor years unborn
    Could to my sight that heavenly face restore.

    That other occasion occurred as he “stood forlorn” just after the death of his loved one, probably by the gravesite. At that time, as he stood by the grave of the departed, he suffered deeply “knowing my heart’s best treasure was no more.” 

    The speaker recalls the distressing awareness that he would never look upon “that heavenly face” again. He remembers thinking that time “neither present time, nor years unborn” would ever resolve the grief he was experiencing.

    The Efficacy of Strong Emotion

    Strong emotion can bring about many different kinds of worldly experiences.   The strong feeling that penetrates the heart and then runs beyond the mind is capable of attracting the soul in its infinite wisdom and storehouse of thoughts and experiences and eliciting from the soul the very objects on which the mind and heart have depended for love and affection.

    Image:  William Wordsworth https://www.npg.org.uk/collections/search/portraitExtended/mw06934/William-Wordsworth?   Henry William Pickersgill - National Portrait Gallery, London
    Image:  William Wordsworth –   Henry William Pickersgill – National Portrait Gallery, London
  • Robert Graves’ “Not Dead”

    044a Robert Graves
    Image: Robert Graves – National Portrait Gallery, London

    Robert Graves’ “Not Dead”

    The speaker in Robert Graves’ elegy “Not Dead” remembers his son who died in war; his elegiac tribute resurrects the young man as a spiritual reality.

    Introduction and Text of “Not Dead”

    Actually, the speaker in Robert Graves’ “Not Dead” does more than just remember because in his act of dramatizing the son’s spiritual qualities, he renders the young man’s presence as something quite tangible. 

    The elegy plays out in a curtal sonnet, a form created by Father Gerard Manley Hopkins.  The sonnet may be considered innovative because the rime-scheme—aabccb cbbdd—differs from the traditional abcabc dcbdc or abcabc dbcdc.

    Not Dead

    Walking through trees to cool my heat and pain, 
    I know that David’s with me here again.
    All that is simple, happy, strong, he is. 
    Caressingly I stroke 
    Rough bark of the friendly oak.
    A brook goes bubbling by: the voice is his. 
    Turf burns with pleasant smoke;
    I laugh at chaffinch and at primroses. 
    All that is simple, happy, strong, he is.
    Over the whole wood in a little while 
    Breaks his slow smile.

    Commentary on “Not Dead”

    The speaker in Graves’ “Not Dead” is remembering his son who died in war, but this particular remembering also dramatizes the resurrection of the young man as a spiritual reality.

    First Movement:  Walking to Clear the Mind

    Walking through trees to cool my heat and pain, 
    I know that David’s with me here again.
    All that is simple, happy, strong, he is. 
    Caressingly I stroke  

    In the opening line of Robert Graves’ “Not Dead,” the speaker locates himself in a wood, “Walking through trees to cool my heat and pain.” He has gone for a simple walk to clear his mind to allow himself to mourn his loss. 

    However, instead of mourning the loss of his son, he transforms that loss into a spiritual reality, asserting, “I know that David’s with me here again.” The spiritual presence of the son made itself known to the father, as the father walks through the woods.  The calmness of the natural setting has rendered the speaker capable of sensing the spiritual level of being.

    Instead of dramatizing the physical absence of his son, the speaker begins to muse on the spiritual reality of the son’s presence. The speaker avers that his son, David, influences the universe in a positive manner:”All that is simple, happy, strong, he is.”  

    He is insisting that David “is”—not “was,” as might be expected in remarking about the deceased.  The importance of that line is so strong that it is later repeated intact.  The speaker’s sense of his son’s essence remains with him.

    Second Movement:  The Ethereal Speaker

    Rough bark of the friendly oak.
    A brook goes bubbling by: the voice is his. 
    Turf burns with pleasant smoke;
    I laugh at chaffinch and at primroses.  

    In a way of supporting his astounding claim that David is, indeed, with him again, and that David “is,” the speaker suggests that the qualities he finds in nature, in fact, resurrect the qualities of his son.  The speaker lovingly touches the “[r]ough bark of the friendly oak.” The oak is “friendly,” suggesting the same familial and familiar relationship he enjoyed with his son. 

    The speaker “caressingly” “strokes” the bark; the act of listening to and perhaps discussing ideas with his son is brought back to his mind by this simple natural act of touching the bark of a tree.  

    Then the speaker hears the “bubbling” of a brook and avers that that sound is David’s voice. He continues finding his son in the pleasant odor of the burning turf, in the sound of a bird melody and in the beauty of the primroses. 

    Third Movement:   Summary of a Life

    All that is simple, happy, strong, he is.
    Over the whole wood in a little while 
    Breaks his slow smile.

    Then the speaker repeats the important line that describes his son: “All that is simple, happy, strong, he is.” This line offers the summation of the life of the deceased, and it serves as a signifier for the speaker as he dramatizes David’s qualities in order to resurrect the spirit of his son.  

    The final two lines—”Over the whole wood in a little while / Breaks his slow smile—reveal the success of the speaker’s dramatic attempts to summon his son’s spirit from the physical grave. 

    The speaker can sense David’s smile in the “whole wood,” and the speaker’s mourning is transcended by the “simple, happy, strong” qualities that were and, more importantly, are the hallmark of his son as a soul. 

    The speaker will still miss the physical presence of his son, but the son’s soul qualities will live on in the resurrection and drama of this speaker/poet’s creation. The speaker comes to realize that the soul is permanent, even though the body is not.

    Image b:  Robert Graves https://theamericanreader.com/3-january-1951-robert-graves-to-derek-savage/  The American Reader
    Image: Robert Graves – The American Reader

    Brief Life Sketch of Robert Graves

    Born in Wimbledon, a wealthy suburb of London, in 1895, Robert Graves [1] enjoyed a long career as a poet, biographer, novelist, translator, classical scholar, and mythographer, before dying in Majorca in 1985.

    Robert Graves was twice married, producing four children in each marriage.  The poem “Not Dead” grows out of the war death of his son, David.  Between marriages, Graves lived with the American poet, Laura Riding (aka Laura Riding Jackson and Laura Riding Gottschalk, née Reichenthal), who is associated with the Fugitive Movement (See “The Fugitive-Agrarian Movement in Poetry.”

    Graves’ dalliance with Riding provides his biography with an especially dramatic episode [2].  Riding took a fancy to the husband of one of their friends, and when she could not win him, she jumped out a three-story window, fracturing her pelvis in three places.

    Graves had tried to stop Riding from jumping by jumping out the second-floor window himself.  They both recovered from their traumatic injuries.  Graves went on to marry his second wife; Riding went on the win the Nashville Poetry Prize in 1924 [3] and marry Schuyler Jackson in 1941.

    Most noted for his poetry, Grave’s produced upwards of 150 works in his prolific career.  It is thought that Graves quipped [4]: “There’s no money in poetry, but then there’s no poetry in money, either.” 

    Sources for “Brief Life Sketch of Robert Graves”

    [1]  Editors.  “Robert Graves.”  Poetry Foundation. Accessed October 14, 2026.
    [2]  David Mason.  “The One Story of Robert Graves.”  The Hudson Review.  Vol. 72.  No. 1. Spring 2019.  Via JSTOR.
    [3] Curators.  “Laura Riding Jackson.” Academy of American Poets.  Accessed October 14, 2026.
    [4]  Leo Hickman. “The Rise of Poetry in Advertising.” The Guardian.  December 1, 2009.

  • Robert Frost’s “To E. T.” and Friendship with Edward Thomas

    Image: Robert Frost in 1943. (Eric Schaal/The LIFE Picture Collection/Getty Images)
    Image: Robert Frost in 1943. (Eric Schaal/The LIFE Picture Collection/Getty Images)

    Robert Frost’s “To E. T.”

    The speaker in Robert Frost poem, “To E. T.,” expresses his musings about his friendship with a fellow poet, who died serving as a soldier in World War I.

    Introduction and Text of “To E. T.”

    The initials E. T. are those of Edward Thomas, with whom Robert Frost had formed a close friendship while Frost resided in England.  Thomas is likely responsible in no small part for assisting in the launching of Frost’s illustrious career as a poet.  

    In 1914, Frost published in first collection of poems, North of Boston, and Thomas wrote a glowing review of the book, after which the American audience began to pay serious attention to the works of Frost.

    Robert Frost’s poem, “To E. T.,” plays out in five quatrains, each with rime scheme ABCB.   In “E.T.,” the speaker’s main focus is on the nature of consciousness after war, especially after experiencing the death of friend who died serving in a war.  

    Frost had encouraged his friend, Thomas, to relocate to New England, but Thomas chose to serve in World War I, in which he died.  That death left Frost with his curious musing about the nature of war consciousness.

    To E.T.

    I slumbered with your poems on my breast
    Spread open as I dropped them half-read through
    Like dove wings on a figure on a tomb
    To see, if in a dream they brought of you, 

    I might not have the chance I missed in life
    Through some delay, and call you to your face
    First soldier, and then poet, and then both,
    Who died a soldier-poet of your race. 

    I meant, you meant, that nothing should remain
    Unsaid between us, brother, and this remained—
    And one thing more that was not then to say:
    The Victory for what it lost and gained. 

    You went to meet the shell’s embrace of fire
    On Vimy Ridge; and when you fell that day
    The war seemed over more for you than me,
    But now for me than you—the other way. 

    How over, though, for even me who knew
    The foe thrust back unsafe beyond the Rhine,
    If I was not to speak of it to you
    And see you pleased once more with words of mine? 

    Commentary on Robert Frost’s “E. T.”

    Robert Frost’s poem “E. T.” offers a moving tribute to Frost’s friend, Edward Thomas.

    First Quatrain:  Prompting a Dream

    I slumbered with your poems on my breast
    Spread open as I dropped them half-read through
    Like dove wings on a figure on a tomb
    To see, if in a dream they brought of you, 

    The speaker opens his musing by revealing that he had attempted to prompt a dream of his friend by spreading the friend’s poems over his chest as he dropped off to sleep.   The poems were spread over the speaker’s chest and resembled the wings of a dove that one sees on tombs.  Because the dear friend of the speaker has died, the image works marvelously.

    The speaker had revealed that he has only “half-read” through the poems before he dropped them across his body, and he admits that he has spread the poem there with the specific intention of provoking a dream of the friend.

    Second Quatrain:  What Remains Unspoken

    I might not have the chance I missed in life
    Through some delay, and call you to your face
    First soldier, and then poet, and then both,
    Who died a soldier-poet of your race.

    The speaker apparently would like to have told his friend that he considered the man both a poet and a soldier.  The speaker places those two positions in the odd context of lineage.  

    He said he would tell to the friend’s face that he was indeed first a soldier, and then a poet. But then he adds “both,” as if to choose one over the other might somehow insult either the friend or either of the two positions.

    The speaker then claims that the friend “died a soldier-poet of your race.”  So he ends where he begins, in a sense, by placing soldier first in the phrase.  By race, the speaker surely means nation.  The friend about whom this poem was written is, of course, Edward Thomas, who died serving his country, England, in WWI.  

    Frost likely used the term “race” so loosely, in order to effect the rime with “face.”  (This use of rime is always unseemly, and it happens too often, allowing meaning to take a back seat to rime.)

    Third Quatrain:  An Unfortunate Omission

    I meant, you meant, that nothing should remain
    Unsaid between us, brother, and this remained—
    And one thing more that was not then to say:
    The Victory for what it lost and gained. 

    In the third quatrain, the speaker reveals that his relationship with the deceased was a close one.  They both had intended that nothing between them would ever remain “unsaid.” 

    He calls his friend “brother” to demonstrate the closeness of their friendship.  However, the speaker is sorry that he did not have the chance to say to his friend that he considered him a soldier-poet.

    In addition to that unfortunate omission, the speaker realizes that they had not had the opportunity to say exactly what each would have considered “Victory.”  The speaker remains somewhat vague about his notion of victory over what, as he just says, “Victory for what is lost and gained.”

    The speaker senses that his friend felt that by serving in war, the friend had gained a victory, but the speaker likely wishes he could have discussed that with the friend in order to understand it better.  

    The speaker knows what he has lost; he has lost his friend, but now he is having difficulty in accepting that loss as a positive instead of negative event in his life, and also in the lives of both men.

    Fourth Quatrain:  Death and Questions

    You went to meet the shell’s embrace of fire
    On Vimy Ridge; and when you fell that day
    The war seemed over more for you than me,
    But now for me than you—the other way. 

    It was at the Battle of Vimy Ridge that the Canadian Corps demonstrated it ability to fight successfully.  Despite great losses, the Canadians came out victorious with the other Allied troops.  In this battle, Edward Thomas died, and the speaker in this poem recognizes the fact.

    The speaker dramatizes his friends death by metaphorically likening it to meeting an embrace, but this embrace is of “fire” from the shell that took the life of Thomas.  When the speaker’s friend “fell that day,” the war was over for his friend, and the speaker says that at the time, it seemed to him that it over more for the dead friend than for himself.

    But now it seems the opposite for the speaker.  Now it seems that the war is over more the speaker than the friend, likely because the friend will now forever continue to be a casualty of war, which keeps him tied to that event.

    Fifth Quatrain:  Nature of the Consciousness of War 

    How over, though, for even me who knew
    The foe thrust back unsafe beyond the Rhine,
    If I was not to speak of it to you
    And see you pleased once more with words of mine? 

    The speaker continues musing on for whom the war is more over, and he poses a question, rhetorical in nature, wondering how the war can in fact be over more for either of them unless he is able to express that fact in words to his friend.

    The speaker inserts into his question the fact that the Battle of Vimy (and the larger Battle of Arras) had sent the Germans packing “beyond the Rhine.”   But the speaker remains in a state of quandary from not knowing how the friend would feel about the war effort and also continuing to wonder if the friend would be “pleased once more with words of mine.”

    The speaker is obviously referring to the fellow poet-friend’s being pleased with the speaker’s poem.  But the speaker also continues to wonder about the friend’s consciousness and how, if he were still living, he would reckon his values with the nature of war and how that reckoning would influence his poetry. 

    Image b: Second Lieutenant Edward Thomas https://www.edward-thomas-fellowship.org.uk/photos.html  Edward Thomas Fellowship
    Image: Second Lieutenant Edward Thomas –  Edward Thomas Fellowship

    Life Sketch of Edward Thomas

    British poet, Edward Thomas, who was killed in the Battle of Arras during World War I, may be most famous for his friendship with American poet, Robert Frost, who penned his important poetic tribute—”To E. T.”— to his friend after the second lieutenant’s becoming a war casualty.

    Early Life

    Philip Edward Thomas was born in Lambeth, London on March 3, 1878, to Welch parents, Philip Henry Thomas and Mary Elizabeth Thomas. Edward was the oldest of the couple’s six sons [1].  His father entertained a strong interest in the life of the mind and political subjects; thus, he paid little attention to his six sons.  

    Edward and his father were very different in personality and disagreed on most areas of life; his father disdained Edward’s choice of a literary career.   Thomas penned a poem that reveals the tenor of his relationship with his father.  He titled the poem simply with his father’s initials [2]:

    P.H.T.

    I may come near loving you
    When you are dead
    And there is nothing to do
    And much to be said.

    To repent that day will be
    Impossible
    For you and vain for me
    The truth to tell.

    I shall be sorry for
    Your impotence:
    You can do and undo no more
    When you go hence,

    Cannot even forgive
    The funeral.
    But not so long as you live
    Can I love you at all.

    Thomas wrote the poem in February of 1916, but it was not published until 1949.  Thomas father had remained adamant that his son take up civil service for his career, instead of writing.  

    Thomas was equally as adamant against that choice for his life’s work.  The fact that the father and son had nothing of importance in common results in the animosity on display in Thomas poem addressing his father.

    On Becoming a Writer

    Edward Thomas attended Battersea Grammar and Saint Paul’s Schools in London; in 1898, he then entered Lincoln College at Oxford and majored in history, graduating in 1900.   It was during this time that he determined to become a writer [3].  

    Thomas did take the civil service examination at his father’s behest. However, because of his intense interest in writing, instead of seeking a civil service position, he began writing essays about his many hikes. 

    Marriage

    In 1899, Thomas married Helen Noble, daughter of James Ashcroft Noble. The couple had three children, Bronwen, Merfyn, and Myfanwy.  Soon after the marriage, Thomas was awarded a scholarship to Lincoln College in Oxford, from where he graduated with a history degree. 

    Thomas became a reviewer for the Daily Chronicle, where he wrote reviews of nature books, literary criticism, and current poetry.  Thomas’ earnings were meager at that time, and the family relocated five time in the span of ten years.

    Suffering Depression

    In 1896, through the influence and encouragement of James Ashcroft Noble, a successful literary journalist and who became Thomas’ father-in-law three years later, Thomas published his first book of essays titled The Woodland Life. 

    He had also enjoyed many holidays in Wales. With his literary friend, Richard Jefferies, Thomas had spent a great deal of time hiking and exploring the landscape in Wales, where he accumulated material for his nature writings.

    Thomas wrote and published several significant biographies and critical studies, which include biographies of the important writers and critics such as Richard Jefferies (1909), Maurice Maeterlinck (1911), Algernon Charles Swinburne (1912), and Walter Pater (1913).  

    Despite his success in writing critical works, Thomas’ health suffered as he brooded over his financial situation and his lack of opportunity to engage in more creative writing efforts.

    Because of his friendships with women writers such Eleanor Farjeon, along with his brooding melancholy, his marriage began to suffer.  In 1913, he relocated his family to Steep Village, where he took up autobiographical writing and other writings of a more creative nature.  He then produced his most famous works.

    Image c: Edward Thomas and Robert Frost https://www.theguardian.com/books/2011/jul/29/robert-frost-edward-thomas-poetry  Cotswolds Photo Library/Alamy via The Guardian
    Image: Edward Thomas and Robert Frost – Cotswolds Photo Library/Alamy via The Guardian

    Friendship with Robert Frost

    The move to Steep Village also had a healthful influence on Thomas. In Steep Village, Thomas began writing his more creative works, including Childhood, The Icknield Way (1913), The Happy-Go-Lucky Morgans (1913), and In Pursuit of Spring (1914). It was also during this period that Thomas met Robert Frost, and their fast friendship began. 

    Frost and Thomas, who both were at very early points in their writing careers, would take long walks through the countryside and attend the local writers meetings. About their friendship, Frost later quipped, “I never had, I never shall have another such year of friendship.”

    In 1914, Edward Thomas helped launch Frost’s career by writing a glowing review of Frost’s first collection of poems, North of Boston. Frost encouraged Thomas to write poetry, and Thomas composed his blank-verse poem, “Up the Wind,” which Thomas published under the pen-name, “Edward Eastaway.”

    Robert Frost’s poem, “The Road Not Taken,” was inspired by Thomas’ dissatisfaction with their path choices during their nature hikes.  About the poem, Frost explained to Thomas:  “No matter which road you take, you’ll always sigh, and wish you’d taken another.”   Frost treasured his relationship with Thomas, writing that “Edward Thomas was the only brother I ever had.”

    War and Death

    Edward Thomas continued to write more poetry, but with the onset of World War I, the literary market took a down-turn. Thomas considered relocating his family to Frost’s New England. But at the same time he was also considering whether to become a soldier. 

    Frost encouraged him to move to New England, but Thomas chose to join the army.  In a letter, dated August 30, 1914, to Walter de la Mare, Thomas wrote: “If the war goes on I believe I shall find myself a sort of Englishman, though neither poet or soldier” [4].

    In 1915, Thomas signed up with the Artists’ Rifles, a regiment of the British Army Reserve [5]. As a Lance Corporal, Thomas became an instructor to fellow officers, which included Wilfred Owen, the poet most noted for his melancholy war verse.

    Thomas took up training as an Officer Cadet with the Royal Garrison Artillery service in September 1916. Commissioned as a second lieutenant in November, he deployed to northern France. On April 9, 1917, Thomas was killed in the Battle of Vimy Ridge, the first of the larger Battle of Arras. He is buried in the Agny Military Cemetery.

    Sources

    [1] Editors.  “Edward Thomas.”  Academy of American Poets.  Accessed October 12, 2026.
    [2] Edward Thomas.  “P.H.T.”  Special Collections and Archive.  Accessed October 12, 2026.
    [3] William Green.  “Biography of Edward Thomas.”  Poem Analysis.  Accessed October 12, 2026.
    [4] Katharine Lindsay.  “Edward Thomas Biography.” University of Oxford.  Accessed October 12, 2026.
    [5] Matthew Hollis. “Edward Thomas, Robert Frost, and the Road to War.”  The Guardian. July 29, 2011.

    Image d:    Edward Thomas  https://www.skyminds.net/war-poet-edward-thomas/ -  SkyMinds
    Image: Edward Thomas  –  SkyMinds

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “The Circuit Judge”

    Image: Edgar Lee Masters http://www.poorwilliam.net/al-082314.html Poor William’s Almanack
    Image: Edgar Lee Masters – Poor William’s Almanack

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “The Circuit Judge”

    The speaker in the Spoon River epitaph series titled “The Circuit Judge” indicts the legal system, using himself as a symbol.   The judge is actually judging his own life.

    Introduction and Text of  “The Circuit Judge”

    In Edgar Lee Masters’ “The Circuit Judge” from Masters’ American classic Spoon River Anthology, the speaker is a circuit judge who judges himself rather harshly.    While he remains indignant that the weather has etched little notches in his tombstone, in the end, he seems to deserve every indignity he might have suffered in life and now in death.

    This judge sentenced the character “Hod Putt” to death, and Putt then died by hanging.  But the judge’s final judgment about his own character is shocking as it reveals the hell to which the judge seems to be condemning himself and his profession.

    The Circuit Judge 

    Take note, passers-by, of the sharp erosions
    Eaten in my head-stone by the wind and rain—
    Almost as if an intangible Nemesis or hatred
    Were marking scores against me,
    But to destroy, and not preserve, my memory.
    I in life was the Circuit Judge, a maker of notches,
    Deciding cases on the points the lawyers scored,
    Not on the right of the matter.
    O wind and rain, leave my head-stone alone!
    For worse than the anger of the wronged,
    The curses of the poor,
    Was to lie speechless, yet with vision clear,
    Seeing that even Hod Putt, the murderer,
    Hanged by my sentence,
    Was innocent in soul compared with me.

    Commentary on “The Circuit Judge”

    The speaker in the Spoon River epitaph series titled “The Circuit Judge” makes a clear indictment of the legal system as symbolized by the judge as he judges his own life.

    First Movement:  Pointing out Flaws

    Take note, passers-by, of the sharp erosions 

    Eaten in my head-stone by the wind and rain—

    The circuit judge begins his testimony by commanding his listeners and readers to observe that his tombstone has been etched with “sharp erosions.”  These etchings have been colorfully “eaten” into his marker by the “wind” and “rain.”

    The judge immediately identifies his complaint as one that will include all of nature conspiring against him.  Even the wind and rain have joined in the battle against this man by carving little “erosion” into the very stone that will give the judge his final presence.

    Second Movement:  A Destructive Conspiracy 

    Almost as if an intangible Nemesis or hatred
    Were marking scores against me,
    But to destroy, and not preserve, my memory. 

    The judge’s complaint then begins to describe what he feels is the conspiracy to “destroy” his memory.  While etchings in tombstones are placed to “preserve” the memory of the deceased, these eroded markings made by the elements function to obliterate the judge’s memory.

    The judge likens the fact of the etchings to the work of an “intangible Nemesis” which is marking “scores” against the judge.  This Nemesis can also be thought of as simple “hatred” against the men.

    Third Movement:  Passing the Buck

    I in life was the Circuit Judge, a maker of notches,
    Deciding cases on the points the lawyers scored,
    Not on the right of the matter. 

    The speaker then reports the while living he served as the “Circuit Judge.”  He states that his function was to make notches.  But instead of deciding cases on their merits, he had to judge them from the presented “points” that the “lawyers scored” as they argued before this bench.

    The judge is beginning to pass the buck when he whines that he had to judge cases based on the argument of the lawyers instead of what was “right” in each case.

    The judge is implying that he would have preferred to judge differently from what he did.  He would have preferred to judge by the “right of the matter.”    With this complaint the judge is implying that the law and the lawyers were corrupt, and he was merely an innocent victim sucked into the quagmire of corruption.

    Fourth Movement:  Commanding the Weather

    O wind and rain, leave my head-stone alone!

    The speaker, however, remains fairly vague about his complaint, offering no example of corrupt law or lawyers who argued without merit.  But then the judge yells out to the wind and rain, demanding that they cease carving their marks into his headstone. 

    Instead of confronting any living human being who might have been responsible for passing poor laws or addressing any of the lawyers who argued them, the judge rails at the natural elements of wind and rain.  Knowing that these elements will not choose to refute his claims, the judge feels safe in demanding that the wind and rain leave his tombstone in peace.

    Fifth Movement:  Injustices from the Bench

    For worse than the anger of the wronged,
    The curses of the poor,
    Was to lie speechless, yet with vision clear,
    Seeing that even Hod Putt, the murderer,
    Hanged by my sentence,
    Was innocent in soul compared with me.

    The speaker then makes his odd conclusion: he shows that because of his judicial decisions, he has suffered “the anger of the wronged.”  He has also had to live with “curses of the poor.”  But as bad as these indignities have been, it is far worse that he now has to lie in his grave where he cannot speak out against those indignities. 

    Yet, the judge then makes a stunning confession.  He claims that even the murderer, Hod Putt, whom the judge condemned to death by hanging, was a more innocent soul than the judge himself.

    If the judge is more culpable then a murderer whom the judge had sentenced to hang, then it must be assumed that he caused many deaths and a multitude of other injustices from the bench.

  • T. S. Eliot’s “Rhapsody on a Windy Night”

    Image:  T. S. Eliot - https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/t-s-eliot -  Poetry Foundation
    Image:  T. S. Eliot –  Poetry Foundation

    T. S. Eliot’s “Rhapsody on a Windy Night”

    The wildly famous show tune “Memory” by Andrew Lloyd Webber was inspired by T. S. Eliot’s “Rhapsody on a Windy Night” and “Preludes.” This article focuses on the former, which features a speaker whose rant exemplifies the very definition of a lunatic.

    Introduction with Text of “Rhapsody on a Windy Night”

    The speaker of T. S. Eliot’s “Rhapsody on a Windy Night” goes for a four-hour walk beginning at midnight in an undisclosed city. The poem consists of 78 lines contained in eight versagraphs.   Rime is sporadic as is rhythm, and the theme is the mocking desecration of the city coupled with a drunken fantasy.

    Although T. S. Eliot’s works have been taken as deeply serious social commentaries on society going-to-hell-in-a-handbasket, it is seldom pointed out that he did so with an often belly-laughable humor.   That humor appears raucously in “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock,” and as well, it appears here in “Rhapsody on a Windy Night,” a seemingly straight-faced piece.

    Rhapsody on a Windy Night

    Twelve o’clock.
    Along the reaches of the street
    Held in a lunar synthesis,
    Whispering lunar incantations
    Dissolve the floors of memory
    And all its clear relations,
    Its divisions and precisions,
    Every street lamp that I pass
    Beats like a fatalistic drum,
    And through the spaces of the dark
    Midnight shakes the memory
    As a madman shakes a dead geranium. 

    Half-past one,
    The street lamp sputtered,
    The street lamp muttered,
    The street lamp said, “Regard that woman
    Who hesitates towards you in the light of the door
    Which opens on her like a grin.
    You see the border of her dress
    Is torn and stained with sand,
    And you see the corner of her eye
    Twists like a crooked pin.” 

    The memory throws up high and dry
    A crowd of twisted things;
    A twisted branch upon the beach
    Eaten smooth, and polished
    As if the world gave up
    The secret of its skeleton,
    Stiff and white.
    A broken spring in a factory yard,
    Rust that clings to the form that the strength has left
    Hard and curled and ready to snap. 

    Half-past two,
    The street lamp said,
    “Remark the cat which flattens itself in the gutter,
    Slips out its tongue
    And devours a morsel of rancid butter.”
    So the hand of a child, automatic,
    Slipped out and pocketed a toy that was running along the quay.
    I could see nothing behind that child’s eye.
    I have seen eyes in the street
    Trying to peer through lighted shutters,
    And a crab one afternoon in a pool,
    An old crab with barnacles on his back,
    Gripped the end of a stick which I held him. 

    Half-past three,
    The lamp sputtered,
    The lamp muttered in the dark. 

    The lamp hummed:
    “Regard the moon,
    La lune ne garde aucune rancune,
    She winks a feeble eye,
    She smiles into corners.
    She smoothes the hair of the grass.
    The moon has lost her memory.
    A washed-out smallpox cracks her face,
    Her hand twists a paper rose,
    That smells of dust and old Cologne,
    She is alone
    With all the old nocturnal smells
    That cross and cross across her brain.”
    The reminiscence comes
    Of sunless dry geraniums
    And dust in crevices,
    Smells of chestnuts in the streets,
    And female smells in shuttered rooms,
    And cigarettes in corridors
    And cocktail smells in bars.” 

    The lamp said,
    “Four o’clock,
    Here is the number on the door.
    Memory!
    You have the key,
    The little lamp spreads a ring on the stair,
    Mount.
    The bed is open; the tooth-brush hangs on the wall,
    Put your shoes at the door, sleep, prepare for life.” 

    The last twist of the knife.

    Reading by Jeremy Irons

    Commentary on “Rhapsody on a Windy Night”

    The speaker turns a four-hour walk into a social commentary through grotesque images, loopy sporadic rime, and hints of societal degradation being ushered in by the postmodernist mindset.

    First Versagraph:  Describing the Sights of the City

    Twelve o’clock.
    Along the reaches of the street
    Held in a lunar synthesis,
    Whispering lunar incantations
    Dissolve the floors of memory
    And all its clear relations,
    Its divisions and precisions,
    Every street lamp that I pass
    Beats like a fatalistic drum,
    And through the spaces of the dark
    Midnight shakes the memory
    As a madman shakes a dead geranium. 

    In the first versagraph, the speaker reports that it is “Twelve o’clock.” He then begins to dramatize his walk through the streets, describing what he sees: he asserts that the moon is encasing the streetscape, as it provides a kind of canvas on which to write his social commentary.  

    The “lunar synthesis” is the important backdrop for the streetscape.  The moon with its chant-like iterations causes the speaker’s memory to disappear like sugar in water.    The speaker is finding his ability to remember where he is a bit difficult; at this point, the reader might suspect that the speaker is considerably inebriated.

    The drunken portrayal of the street lamps offers further evidence that the speaker is possibly so drunk that his thoughts and memories are misaligned because he states that each “street lamp” by which he stumbles seems to be beating like a “fatalistic drum.”  

    It is likely that it is the speaker’s head that is beating like that deadly persuasion instrument.   The speaker then offers the hilarious image: he concocts a deranged fellow shaking a “dead geranium” and likens that preposterous image to his own memory being shaken by midnight because of the dark spaces which that time of day features.  

    He is finding that his memory as well as his drunken status are making it difficult for him to maneuver through the midnight streets.  The speaker is implying that only through a drunken stupor could a sane individual find the courage and wherewithal to try to navigate the filth through which he must move.

    Second Versagraph:  Sporadic Rhythm and Rime 

    Half-past one,
    The street lamp sputtered,
    The street lamp muttered,
    The street lamp said, “Regard that woman
    Who hesitates towards you in the light of the door
    Which opens on her like a grin.
    You see the border of her dress
    Is torn and stained with sand,
    And you see the corner of her eye
    Twists like a crooked pin.” 

    By the second versagraph, the speaker has been walking for an hour and half. The reader is treated to one of the sporadic rimes that pop up occasionally:   “The street lamp sputtered, / The street lamp muttered.”

    The speaker encounters another person out walking, and the street lamp tells him to look at her. She is undoubtedly a prostitute whose “dress / Is torn and stained with sand.” 

    The speaker’s mind again is strangely interpreting things as he sees “the corner of her eye / Twists like a crooked pin.” But then it is the street lamp that says all this, so one cannot place all the blame on the speaker for reporting such gibberish.

    It should be noted that T. S. Eliot was writing at the edge of postmodern gibberish, and thus he did not shy away from taking advantage of the latitude that was being offered up by that reckless and disingenuous style.    The important difference between Eliot and the postmods is that Eliot had an genuine point of view and the skill with which to express it.

    Third Versagraph:  Twisted Things

    The memory throws up high and dry
    A crowd of twisted things;
    A twisted branch upon the beach
    Eaten smooth, and polished
    As if the world gave up
    The secret of its skeleton,
    Stiff and white.
    A broken spring in a factory yard,
    Rust that clings to the form that the strength has left
    Hard and curled and ready to snap. 

    The third versagraph merely reports that his memory is vomiting a bunch of things that are twisted, things that are also “high and dry.”  He offers examples of those twisted things, such as “a twisted branch upon the beach.” This line alerts the reader that the speaker is walking in a coastal city.

    The speaker also notes that the twisted branch appears to be stripped so smooth that it reminds him of a skeleton, “still and white.”  He then marks a rusty “spring” in a “factory yard” which has been abandoned and which is likely dangerous because it appears to have hardened, and now it is “curled and ready to snap.”  

    A kid or any person walking by that loaded spring could become a victim akin to a stabbing.   The speaker places that possibility in the mind of readers for special effect to remind them that he is describing a degraded landscape that has the ability to take victims in unexpected places.

    Fourth Versagraph:  Keeping Track of Time

    Half-past two,
    The street lamp said,
    “Remark the cat which flattens itself in the gutter,
    Slips out its tongue
    And devours a morsel of rancid butter.”
    So the hand of a child, automatic,
    Slipped out and pocketed a toy that was running along the quay.
    I could see nothing behind that child’s eye.
    I have seen eyes in the street
    Trying to peer through lighted shutters,
    And a crab one afternoon in a pool,
    An old crab with barnacles on his back,
    Gripped the end of a stick which I held him. 

    It is now “Half-past two.”  The street lamp is talking again; this time it is reporting that a cat is in a gutter eating butter—an image that is offering up another sporadic rime.   Then the speaker likens the cat’s tongue lurching out to grab the butter to a street urchin grabbing a toy as he ran “along the quay.”  

    The speaker describes the child’s eye as holding “nothing”—a very disturbing image that again adds to his description of degradation and poverty that continue to flood the landscape—especially the streetscape.  The speaker then continues his report about empty eyes that he has seen before. He has seen such blank stares through “lighted shutters.” 

    Then he is ready to add another ridiculous image to his repertoire: he has observed an “old crab with barnacles on his back” and that old crab was grabbing the “end of a stick” that the speaker was holding out for him.

    Fifth and  Sixth Versagraphs:  The Lamp Rimes Again and Speaks French

    Half-past three,
    The lamp sputtered,
    The lamp muttered in the dark. 

    The lamp hummed:
    “Regard the moon,
    La lune ne garde aucune rancune,
    She winks a feeble eye,
    She smiles into corners.
    She smoothes the hair of the grass.
    The moon has lost her memory.
    A washed-out smallpox cracks her face,
    Her hand twists a paper rose,
    That smells of dust and old Cologne,
    She is alone
    With all the old nocturnal smells
    That cross and cross across her brain.”
    The reminiscence comes
    Of sunless dry geraniums
    And dust in crevices,
    Smells of chestnuts in the streets,
    And female smells in shuttered rooms,
    And cigarettes in corridors
    And cocktail smells in bars.” 

    The street lamp again offers the opportunity for a sporadic rime, again it is “sputtered” and then “muttered” as the dark continues to remain ascendent.    But now the street lamp begins to speak French as it describes the moon, telling the speaker, “La lune ne garde aucune rancune”: the moon never holds a grudge. 

    The moon lights the corners of memory, as she performs a number of operations such as winking a “feeble eye,” soothing the “hair of the grass,” offering up the image of a “smallpox” scar across her face.

    The speaker continues to lend the moon an array of odd activities, such as twisting “a paper rose” and exuding the smell of “dust and old Cologne.”  He claims that it is only the moon that arouses these strange smells of the night.   It is the speaker’s own drunken memory that is responsible for the concoction of these odd smells along with all of the other images he is creating.  

    Across the brain of the moon, he claims, come these smells that vary: “sunless dry geraniums,” dust in tight places, “chestnuts in the streets,” “female smells” in closed rooms, “cigarette” in hallways, and “cocktail smell in bars.”

    And interestingly, even though the “moon has lost her memory,” the speaker remembers  quite well all of these grotesque smells he has experienced—all of these grotesque smells that the power of the moonlight has brought to the forefront for the speaker, as he walks along the polluted streets of this polluted city.

    The term “lunatic” etymologically descends from the Latin “luna” moon; the original definition of “lunatic” described individuals who were adversely affected the phases of the moon.  

    This speaker’s outlandish images are influenced by the moonlight and the moon’s memory, a perfectly useful symbol for the speaker’s commentary on a spiritually dry and deplorable society.

    Seventh and Eight Versagraphs:  Back at the Flat, as the Knife-Key Turns

    The lamp said,
    “Four o’clock,
    Here is the number on the door.
    Memory!
    You have the key,
    The little lamp spreads a ring on the stair,
    Mount.
    The bed is open; the tooth-brush hangs on the wall,
    Put your shoes at the door, sleep, prepare for life.” 

    The last twist of the knife.

    It is now four o’clock in the morning and the speaker has arrived at presumably his flat. And again, the lamp is doing the speaking telling the speaker that the number he is seeing and remembering is, in fact, his. The speaker holds the key, which becomes a knife, as he finishes his dramatic reportage with a flourish.

    The speaker’s final thrust, appearing in the eighth versagraph, which is bizarrely and postmodernly the single line “The last twist of the knife,” rimes with the preceding line from the seventh versagraph, “Put your shoes at the door, sleep, prepare for life.” 

    The speaker’s whole midnight walk has consisted of nothing but metaphorical knife thrusts from the moon lighting up a decaying streetscape, to a cat lapping up rancid butter, to a prostitute’s eye twisting like “a crooked pin,” to a child’s blank expression, to all those rancid smells that have accosted him. 

    It is, however, his own memory that has brought all of this dissatisfaction and deadening spiritual dryness to the forefront of his thoughts.   Thus, it is hardly surprising that his final notion of sleeping and then starting life over again come morning should be nothing but another “twist of the knife.”

    Image:  T. S. Eliot - https://www.neh.gov/humanities/2016/fall/feature/what-make-t-s-eliot Caricature by John Cuneo
    Image:  T. S. Eliot – Caricature by John Cuneo

    Andrew Lloyd Webber’s “Memory”  

  • T. S. Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”

    Image a:  T. S. Eliot https://www.npg.org.uk/collections/search/portrait/mw57757/TS-Eliot  - Ida Kar - National Portrait Gallery, London
    Image a: T. S. Eliot – Ida Kar – National Portrait Gallery, London

    T. S. Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”

    T. S. Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” represents a conglomeration of many of the ridiculous traits of humankind—and the literati in particular; therefore, readers cannot take Prufrock seriously and are thus at liberty to laugh and enjoy the nutty things he thinks and says.

    Introduction with Text of “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”

    T. S. Eliot composed a little volume titled Old Possum’s Book of Practical Cats, which under the influence of composer Andrew Lloyd Webber, became Cats, one of the ten longest running musicals [1] on Broadway.

    How does one reconcile the lavish and hilarious persona responsible for the likes of old possum and the cats with the gloomy, spiritually dry personality of J. Alfred Prufrock and The Waste Land mentality?   That conflation is somewhat like confusing a man with little education and travel experience for the writer of the Shakespearean canon [2].

    The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock

    S’io credesse che mia risposta fosse
    A persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
    Questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
    Ma percioche giammai di questo fondo
    Non torno vivo alcun, s’i’odo il vero,
    Senza tema d’infamia ti rispondo.

    Let us go then, you and I,
    When the evening is spread out against the sky
    Like a patient etherized upon a table;
    Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets,
    The muttering retreats
    Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels
    And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells:
    Streets that follow like a tedious argument
    Of insidious intent
    To lead you to an overwhelming question …
    Oh, do not ask, “What is it?”
    Let us go and make our visit. 

    In the room the women come and go
    Talking of Michelangelo. 

    The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes,
    The yellow smoke that rubs its muzzle on the window-panes,
    Licked its tongue into the corners of the evening,
    Lingered upon the pools that stand in drains,
    Let fall upon its back the soot that falls from chimneys,
    Slipped by the terrace, made a sudden leap,
    And seeing that it was a soft October night,
    Curled once about the house, and fell asleep. 

    And indeed there will be time
    For the yellow smoke that slides along the street,
    Rubbing its back upon the window-panes;
    There will be time, there will be time
    To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet;
    There will be time to murder and create,
    And time for all the works and days of hands
    That lift and drop a question on your plate;
    Time for you and time for me,
    And time yet for a hundred indecisions,
    And for a hundred visions and revisions,
    Before the taking of a toast and tea. 

    In the room the women come and go
    Talking of Michelangelo. 

    And indeed there will be time
    To wonder, “Do I dare?” and, “Do I dare?”
    Time to turn back and descend the stair,
    With a bald spot in the middle of my hair —
    (They will say: “How his hair is growing thin!”)
    My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,
    My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin —
    (They will say: “But how his arms and legs are thin!”)
    Do I dare
    Disturb the universe?
    In a minute there is time
    For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse. 

    For I have known them all already, known them all:
    Have known the evenings, mornings, afternoons,
    I have measured out my life with coffee spoons;
    I know the voices dying with a dying fall
    Beneath the music from a farther room.
                   So how should I presume?

    And I have known the eyes already, known them all—
    The eyes that fix you in a formulated phrase,
    And when I am formulated, sprawling on a pin,
    When I am pinned and wriggling on the wall,
    Then how should I begin
    To spit out all the butt-ends of my days and ways?
                   And how should I presume? 

    And I have known the arms already, known them all—
    Arms that are braceleted and white and bare
    (But in the lamplight, downed with light brown hair!)
    Is it perfume from a dress
    That makes me so digress?
    Arms that lie along a table, or wrap about a shawl.
                   And should I then presume?
                   And how should I begin? 

    Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
    And watched the smoke that rises from the pipes
    Of lonely men in shirt-sleeves, leaning out of windows? … 

    I should have been a pair of ragged claws
    Scuttling across the floors of silent seas. 

    And the afternoon, the evening, sleeps so peacefully!
    Smoothed by long fingers,
    Asleep … tired … or it malingers,
    Stretched on the floor, here beside you and me.
    Should I, after tea and cakes and ices,
    Have the strength to force the moment to its crisis?
    But though I have wept and fasted, wept and prayed,
    Though I have seen my head (grown slightly bald) brought in upon a platter,
    I am no prophet — and here’s no great matter;
    I have seen the moment of my greatness flicker,
    And I have seen the eternal Footman hold my coat, and snicker,
    And in short, I was afraid. 

    And would it have been worth it, after all,
    After the cups, the marmalade, the tea,
    Among the porcelain, among some talk of you and me,
    Would it have been worth while,
    To have bitten off the matter with a smile,
    To have squeezed the universe into a ball
    To roll it towards some overwhelming question,
    To say: “I am Lazarus, come from the dead,
    Come back to tell you all, I shall tell you all”—
    If one, settling a pillow by her head
                   Should say: “That is not what I meant at all;
                   That is not it, at all.” 

    And would it have been worth it, after all,
    Would it have been worth while,
    After the sunsets and the dooryards and the sprinkled streets,
    After the novels, after the teacups, after the skirts that trail along the floor—
    And this, and so much more?—
    It is impossible to say just what I mean!
    But as if a magic lantern threw the nerves in patterns on a screen:
    Would it have been worth while
    If one, settling a pillow or throwing off a shawl,
    And turning toward the window, should say:
                   “That is not it at all,
                   That is not what I meant, at all.” 

    No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be;
    Am an attendant lord, one that will do
    To swell a progress, start a scene or two,
    Advise the prince; no doubt, an easy tool,
    Deferential, glad to be of use,
    Politic, cautious, and meticulous;
    Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse;
    At times, indeed, almost ridiculous—
    Almost, at times, the Fool. 

    I grow old … I grow old …
    I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled. 

    Shall I part my hair behind?   Do I dare to eat a peach?
    I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
    I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each. 

    I do not think that they will sing to me. 

    I have seen them riding seaward on the waves
    Combing the white hair of the waves blown back
    When the wind blows the water white and black.
    We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
    By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown
    Till human voices wake us, and we drown.

    Reading by Anthony Hopkins

    Commentary on “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”

    T. S. Eliot is really a very funny poet. His works are taken way too seriously.  A reader needs to think irony, satire, and sarcasm and then enjoy a few belly laughs when reading Eliot.  And his character J. Alfred Prufrock offers one of the finest examples of Eliot’s humor, as he, at the same time, skewers the direction of art in the 20th century.

    Prufrock Killed Poetry

    The American humorist Garrison Keillor [3] has offered his experience with and opinion of “old Pru,” claiming that the poem is

    a small, dark mopefest of a poem in which old Pru worries about whether to eat a peach or roll up his trousers.  This poem pretty much killed off the pleasure of poetry for millions of people who got dragged through it in high school.

    Keillor and his ilk who learned to hate poetry because of being “dragged through it in high school” might benefit from revisiting the poem and considering it through a lens of irony brushed with satire and sarcasm.

    For a more precise understanding of the poem, it is also important to realize that it is focusing on and providing a critique of the flaws of modernism, the movement that was having demoralizing effects on the art of poetry.

    The ironic humor of the poem clearly rails against the angst-infused positions that were rendering poetry not only unintelligible but ultimately without literary value.

    Who is J. Alfred Prufrock and what does he want?

    Critics regularly note the ironic disjointedness in the title as a love song apparently sung by a man with a business-suit name. But they then descend into the maudlin angst of this poor pathetic creature, and ultimately they take the work as a criticism of modern society in general, instead of a criticism of the skewed direction of art.

    Eliot was poking fun at such criticism and such stances. The poem itself is a mishmash of form, consisting of 131 lines separated into free-verse paragraphs (versagraphs), yet it has rime throughout, delivered in uneven rhythms. 

    The form itself makes fun of free-verse and phony erudition (the many allusions to classic works that seem so out of place) as it floats them down a stream-of-consciousness. 

    Opening Movement:  The Anesthetized Patient

    The first three lines set up the hilarious mood of the poem: 

    Let us go then, you and I,
    When the evening is spread out against the sky
    Like a patient etherised upon a table.

    The first line sounds as if the speaker of the poem is inviting someone to go somewhere in the evening, perhaps a social gathering or just an outing with a lady friend; after all it is a “love song.” 

    But the reader is slammed in the face as the evening is described as a patient on an operating table being prepared for surgery. The romance of supposed “love song” has died by line three.

    The speaker continues to mumble, describing the evening quite negatively, briefly mentioning one night stands in nasty hotels, disgusting eateries, and the boring streets that lead to boring places of ill-repute—yet all this leads on to “an overwhelming question.” 

    But then the speaker cuts off the thought by telling his listener not to bother asking what the “overwhelming question” is but instead says let’s just get going “and make our visit.” Now, it sounds as if the speaker and his companion are definitely going to a social gathering, maybe a dinner party. 

    But the dinner party never materializes, and it becomes quite apparent that the speaker is simply addressing himself, likely while looking at his face in a mirror.   There is no companion; there is no evening engagement, just a musing voice that is making fun of all the modernist techniques that the poet is employing in the poem through this pathetic speaker. 

    The Italian Epigram:  Professing an “Insidious Intent”

    S’io credesse che mia risposta fosse
    A persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
    Questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
    Ma percioche giammai di questo fondo
    Non torno vivo alcun, s’i’odo il vero,
    Senza tema d’infamia ti rispondo.

    The epigram that opens the poem alerts the reader to the “insidious intent” of the speaker in the poem.  The six lines feature a quotation from Dante’s Inferno (XXVII, 61–66).  The following is a rough translation from the Italian of the epigram:

    If I believed I was trying to bullshit
    someone who could return to the world,
    I would hold my tongue.
    But since no one ever lives to return
    to life again, at least so they say,
    I will spew forth whatever I please.

    The following is an interpretive paraphrase of the Italian epigram:

    if I thought such nonsense would really be foisted on the world, I would not concoct it, but since those who delve into the avant-garde poetry world have nothing to take back, I have deigned to let it fly

    Modern Boredom:  Vacuous Social Gatherings

    The speaker describes the fog in the metaphorical likeness of a dog: it rubs its back and muzzle on the window-panes, and it “[l]icked its tongue into the corners of the evening.” 

    The speaker is concerned about social gatherings; he has often encountered them, and the lines “In the room the women come and go / Talking of Michelangelo” become a mantra.   

    And the line “I have measured out my life with coffee spoons,” which follows his claim to have known all those bored people in offices, lounges, and evening affairs demonstrates the speaker’s awareness of his own boredom. 

    Floating Down the Stream:  Tricky Man, Very Tricky Man

    The speaker inserts telling images into his stream-of-consciousness descriptions of angst-filled scenes with outrageous images such as “I should have been a pair of ragged claws / Scuttling across the floors of silent seas.”  Another outlandish sight is “I grow old … I grow old … / I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled.”

    And while these are famous lines often cited as showing the modern angst of Prufrock, they are quite humorous when one realizes that the speaker is making fun of the serious tone that critics will take regarding the style and highly allusive nature of the poem.  Eliot’s J. Alfred Prufrock has tricked many readers with his dry, spiritually destitute personality.

    Tricked by Eliot’s J. Alfred Prufrock

    The radio star Garrison Keillor blames “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” for “kill[ing] off the pleasure of poetry.” Keillor complains that the poem is “a small, dark mopefest of a poem in which old Pru worries about whether to eat a peach or roll up his trousers.” 

    It is somewhat puzzling that Keillor, whose own banter attempts to lace humor with reportage, does not see the humor in “Old Pru.” Robert Frost asserted that his poem “The Road Not Taken” was “a tricky poem—a very tricky poem.” 

    However, many other Frostian poems have turned out to be quite tricky as well. And T. S. Eliot became a master at composing some of the trickiest poems to grace the poetry world.

    The Character of J. Alfred Prufrock 

    The speaker of T. S. Eliot’s most widely anthologized classic is J. Alfred Prufrock himself, and his personality is the theme of the poem; he is a ridiculous character, utterly laughable.   As Roger Mitchell [4] has explained, 

    [Prufock] is the Representative Man of early Modernism. Shy, cultivated, oversensitive, sexually retarded (many have said impotent), ruminative, isolated, self-aware to the point of solipsism.

    In other words, “old Pru” is merely a conglomeration of many of the ridiculous traits of humankind—and the literati in particular; therefore, readers cannot take Prufrock seriously and are thus at liberty to laugh and enjoy the nutty things he thinks and says.

    Failure to Read Closely 

    Keillor refers to the following lines: “I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled,” and “Shall I part my hair behind? Do I dare to eat a peach?”  The former radio personality has been tricked by Eliot’s poem, and in Keillor’s comment about the poem, two assertions demonstrate his misunderstanding.

    The first false assertion about the poem is that it is a “small, dark mopefest of a poem”: this is a false assertion because the poem is too funny to be a “dark mopefest,” plus it is really a longer poem than most lyrics; thus the descriptor “small” remains inaccurate.

    The second false assertion is that, “old Pru worries about whether to eat a peach or roll up his trousers”:  while “old Pru” does ask if he dares “eat a peach,” he does not question whether he will roll up his trousers.  

    These two false assertions suggest the reason that Keillor has been tricked by the poem; he simply has not read it carefully and closely enough, and likely his high school teacher was not adept at comprehending and teaching poetry. 

    Other Funny Lines 

    The opening of the poem, at first, may simply seem startling, but upon further study, the reader can see the hilarity in the absurdity of “the evening [ ] spread out against the sky / Like a patient etherized upon a table.”   The juxtaposition of “evening/sky” and “etherized patient/table” is just so ludicrous that it is laughable.

    “The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes”: fog becomes a cat or a dog, and the speaker likes that metaphor so well that he repeats it in the next stanza.   Fog as a dog jumps like a frog into the mind as one encounters those lines.

    A close consideration of the lines, “To wonder, ‘Do I dare?’ and, ‘Do I dare?’ / Time to turn back and descend the stair, / With a bald spot in the middle of my hair,”  reveals again the absurdity of taking Keillor’s criticism seriously.

    The jarring juxtaposition of a pathetic creature double questioning his traipsing down a stairway and then hastening to the bald spot in his pate cannot help but elicit a laugh, provided the reader/listener is paying close attention. 

    While Prufrock would be a sympathetic character were he less pitiful, he becomes a caricature, who instead of drawing sympathy draws derision from the reader.  Perhaps by tweaking their reading a bit and by reading closer, Keillor and other casual readers could learn to enjoy the misadventures of J. Alfred Prufrock.

    Sources

    [1] Mark A.Robinson. “Broadway’s 10 Longest-Running Musicals.”  Broadway Direct.  March 24, 2019.
    [2] Linda Sue Grimes. “The “Shakespeare” Writer.”  Linda’s Literary Home.  February 11, 2026.
    [3] Garrison Keillor.   “Choosing the Right Lunch Partners.” The Writer’s Almanac. February 20, 2007.
    [4] Roger Mitchell.  “On ‘The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock’.”  Modern American Poetry.  November 2, 2015.

  • The Maud Gonne Rescue in W. B. Yeats’ “Among School Children”

    Image: William Butler Yeats NPG, London https://www.npg.org.uk/collections/search/portrait/mw118877/WB-Yeats
    Image: William Butler Yeats NPG, London

    The Maud Gonne Rescue in W. B. Yeats’ “Among School Children”

    As is is case with several of Yeats poems, “Among School Children” has suffered a misreading that defeats the poem’s actual achievement:  by reading into the poem the presence of Maud Gonne, critics have misinterpreted the mental quirkiness of an aging “public smiling man”—and thus the human mind universally.

    What the Poem Actually Says

    The conventional reading of W. B. Yeats’ “Among School Children” places Maud Gonne at the center of the poem’s middle stanzas. According to this interpretation, the sixty-year-old Yeats, visiting a school, looks at the children and remembers Gonne as a girl. 

    His thoughts then move through youth, beauty, sexual love, motherhood, aging, philosophy, and finally the famous question of whether the dancer can be separated from the dance.

    This reading is so familiar that it can seem to be what the poem itself says. It is not. Maud Gonne is never named, described, recalled, or represented in the poem. She enters through biographical knowledge about Yeats and is then read back into the text. 

    Yeats did tell Gonne in a June 1928 letter that she would find “a reference to your self” in the poem, but he did not say that she was the child before him, the woman in the Ledaean fantasy, or the subject of a remembered episode [1].

    That distinction is crucial. A private authorial reference is not the same thing as a figure represented in the poem. The poem itself gives us a schoolroom, children, a nun, a sixty-year-old “smiling public man,” a Ledaean fantasy, and the psychological transformation of what the speaker sees.

    The first stanza establishes the dramatic situation precisely. The speaker enters “the long schoolroom,” encounters the children, and notices that their eyes stare at a “sixty-year-old smiling public man.” 

    There is no Maud Gonne. The phrase “smiling public man” is important because it establishes a distinction between the speaker’s public identity and his private mind. He is not simply an old poet remembering his youth; he is a public figure performing a role before an audience.

    The next stanza takes us into that private mind. He says, “I dream of a Ledaean body,” immediately invoking the myth of Leda, without any reference that would evoke Gonne. The passage turns toward sexual union and generation, imagining two natures blended into one.  Again, there is no Maud Gonne, despite the fact that Yeats was, in fact, sexually attracted to Gonne.

    It is at this point that the conventional interpretation begins to go wrong. The critic knows that Gonne was Yeats’ great love, knows that Yeats wrote to her about a reference to herself, sees the Ledaean woman, and supplies Gonne as her identity. But the poem does not make that identification. The poem’s movement is from Leda to the child, not from Gonne to the child.

    The Child Who Is Actually There

    The third stanza makes the distinction even clearer. Thinking about the Ledaean story, the speaker looks at “one child or t’other there” and wonders whether “she stood so at that age.” The children are physically present in the schoolroom, while the imagined woman is being projected onto the child by faulty critical analysis.

    Then comes the psychological center of the passage:  “And thereupon my heart is driven wild: / She stands before me as a living child.”  The conventional reading tends to make this mean that Gonne, remembered as a young girl, suddenly appears vividly to Yeats’ imagination. But the poem does not say that. It says that she stands before him as a living child.

    The Ledaean woman has become imaginatively present through the child who is physically standing before him. The child has not become Gonne. Rather, the speaker’s imagination has overlaid the present child with the woman of the Ledaean fantasy.

    That distinction is exactly what the Gonne interpretation suppresses. Once Gonne is inserted, the psychological event becomes familiar and safe: an aging man looks at children, remembers the girl he once loved, feels the pain of lost youth, and moves toward a contemplative musing on aging.

    But the actual poem is stranger. The speaker is looking at a child while imagining Leda; his “heart is driven wild”; and he experiences the imagined woman as a “living child.” The poem is dramatizing the activity of the speaker’s mind in the presence of an actual child. Maud Gonne is not necessary to explain it, excerpt to attempt to explain away what dirty minds might tend to supply.

    How Gonne Gets into the Poem

    The question, then, is how Maud Gonne became so firmly established in criticism. The answer is biographical. Yeats’ letter gives critics a legitimate reason to suspect that Gonne is somehow being alluded to, and that suspicion has gradually hardened into interpretive certainty.

    But there is a substantial difference between saying that Yeats privately intended Gonne as a reference and saying that the poem represents him remembering Gonne as a girl. The first statement is supported by the letter; the second must be demonstrated from the poem itself.

    Yeats’ wording is notably restrained. He does not tell Gonne that she is the woman in stanza II or the child in stanza III. He does not say that the poem describes her childhood or that the schoolchildren reminded him of her. He says only that she will find “a reference to your self.”

    A reference can be oblique, private, symbolic, or embedded in an image without turning the person referenced into the poem’s subject. The critical error occurs when a reference is converted into a presence and then the presence is treated as though the poem itself had named it.

    Pacey’s “Hub”

    Desmond Pacey provides a particularly useful example. Pacey writes that “The first stanza is the hub of the wheel; the succeeding stanzas are spokes radiating from this hub.” He also describes the poem as a series of “observations, memories, and meditations” upon finding himself “among a class of schoolchildren” [2].

    This distinction offers an important insight. The schoolroom is not merely the place where the poem begins and then disappears. It is the hub from which the later reflections radiate. The children remain part of the dramatic situation even when the speaker’s thoughts move into myth, memory, philosophy, and speculation about generation.

    Yet Pacey then says, “Stanzas II to IV relate to the particular case of Maud Gonne, who was once a child like these but is now an ageing woman.” At this point, the critical displacement occurs. Pacey correctly identifies the schoolroom as the poem’s hub, but then relocates the central psychological action into Gonne’s biography.

    The poem itself does not do that. The speaker looks at “one child or t’other there”; his heart is “driven wild”; and he sees a “living child.” Pacey’s identification of Gonne turns that child into a remembered historical person, but the poem never makes that transformation.

    The “Smiling Public Man”

    At this point in he poem, the Gonne interpretation most seriously obscures the actual event along with its meaning.  The speaker begins as “a sixty-year-old smiling public man.” He then enters a private mental world in which he dreams of Leda, looks at a child, and experiences an intense emotional response. 

    Then he says: “Her present image floats into the mind—” and immediately interrupts himself:  “I … had pretty plumage once—enough of that, / Better to smile on all that smile, and show / There is a comfortable kind of old scarecrow.”

    The psychological sequence is coherent without Gonne:  public man – private fantasy – child – emotional disturbance – self-interruption – return to public performance.  The Gonne reading replaces the actual sequence with a safer sequence:  public man – memory of young Gonne – nostalgia – recognition of aging.

    The second sequence may be biographically plausible, but it is not what the poem explicitly represents. “Enough of that” sounds like an act of self-interruption. The speaker has allowed his imagination to go somewhere he does not wish to pursue, at least in his public role, and thus he deliberately restores his socially appropriate face.

    The poem does not say that the speaker intends to do anything to the child. The important fact is psychological: an image arises in his mind, becomes disturbingly immediate, produces an intense emotional response, and is then suppressed. That ambiguity is precisely what the Gonne interpretation removes.

    Generation Rather Than Gonne

    The fifth stanza naturally continues the poem’s concern with the child. The speaker asks what youthful mother, with “a shape upon her lap,” could have imagined that the child she bore would one day become an aged person.

    The poem has moved from the Ledaean fantasy to generation, from generation to motherhood, and from motherhood to aging. Nothing in this movement requires a memory of Maud Gonne. 

    The child before the speaker represents the beginning of the process whose end he himself embodies at sixty. The poem can therefore move directly from the living child to the aging man without inserting a remembered woman from his past between them.

    The Gonne reading narrows this universal contemplative musing into a biographical one. Instead of seeing the child as the immediate occasion for reflections on generation and aging, the critic turns the child into a disguised portrait of Gonne.

    Philosophy Does Not Rescue the Speaker

    The sixth stanza introduces Plato, Aristotle, and Pythagoras, but the philosophers do not restore the poem to Maud Gonne. They appear because the speaker is trying to understand the problems that have emerged from his encounter with the children: body and mind, youth and age, generation and identity.

    Even the philosophers are rendered bodily. Pythagoras is “golden-thighed,” Aristotle “played the taws,” and the stanza ends with the philosophers reduced to “Old clothes upon old sticks to scare a bird.”

    The movement is therefore not from Gonne to philosophy. It is from the child and the speaker’s experience of the child toward increasingly abstract attempts to understand human existence. Yet those abstractions repeatedly collapse back into bodies. The philosophers become scarecrows. The body remains inescapable.

    The seventh stanza continues the same line of thought when it says, “Both nuns and mothers worship images.” The poem then speaks of “Presences” known through “passion, piety or affection” and finally calls them “self-born mockers of man’s enterprise.”

    These images are relevant to the speaker’s experience because his own mind has produced an image that he has not entirely chosen. The Ledaean figure enters his consciousness, becomes entangled with the child before him, and generates an emotional response that he then attempts to suppress.

    The phrase “self-born” is especially suggestive. The poem has become increasingly concerned with images produced within human consciousness: religious images, maternal images, erotic images, memories, fantasies, and philosophical constructions. 

    The speaker’s Ledaean fantasy belongs to this same world of internally generated “Presences.” His problem is not that he cannot remember Gonne clearly enough; it is that he cannot entirely control what his own imagination produces.

    The Final Stanza

    The final stanza is often treated as the poem’s philosophical resolution, but its famous conclusion is actually a question:  “How can we know the dancer from the dance?”  The question follows naturally from everything that has preceded it. 

    Throughout the poem, the speaker has attempted, consciously or unconsciously, to distinguish past from present, image from reality, body from mind, public identity from private thought, and youth from age. Yet these categories repeatedly become entangled.

    Leda and the child become entangled. The child and the old man are joined through generation. The philosophers become bodies. The public man cannot escape the private mind.  The final question therefore does not require Maud Gonne. It grows naturally from the poem’s sustained examination of the inseparability of embodied existence and consciousness.

    The Critical Insertion of Gonne

    The conventional Gonne interpretation does something more consequential than merely emphasizing Yeats’ biography. It inserts a person into the poem who is not represented there and then uses that person to explain away the psychological event the poem actually represents.

    Once Gonne has been inserted, the child can be interpreted as Gonne’s younger self, the Ledaean fantasy as a memory of Gonne’s beauty, the speaker’s emotional disturbance as nostalgia, and “enough of that” as a conventional recognition of old age.

    But none of these steps is required by the poem. They depend upon first placing Gonne into it.  That makes the reasoning circular. Critics begin with the biographical knowledge that Yeats loved Gonne and that he told her she would recognize herself in the poem. 

    They then interpret the Ledaean woman as Gonne, interpret the child as Gonne, and finally point to the resulting interpretation as evidence that Gonne must have been the poem’s subject. The biographical premise has been transformed into the textual conclusion.

    The proper direction of interpretation should be reversed. Begin with what the poem actually gives us: a public man among schoolchildren; a Ledaean dream; a child; an intense emotional reaction; an image becoming present; a sudden “enough of that”; and a return to the public smile. Only after establishing that sequence should we ask whether a private biographical allusion may lie behind it.

    The Direction of the Poem

    The decisive difference can therefore be stated simply:  The poem moves from Leda to the child, whereas conventional criticism makes it move from Gonne to the child.  That reversal is not a harmless change of emphasis. 

    Leda is explicitly present in the poem; Gonne is not. The child is explicitly present; Gonne is not. The speaker’s heart is explicitly “driven wild”; a nostalgic recollection of Gonne is not. The speaker explicitly says “enough of that”; he does not say that he has had enough of remembering Gonne. He is expressing his dismay at the thoughts that have assailed him against he wishes.

    Once these facts control the reading, the poem’s psychological structure becomes clearer. The “smiling public man” is the man the children see, but the poem takes us inside his mind and shows us a fantasy that becomes unexpectedly immediate. 

    The child remains physically present while the speaker’s imagination overlays her with the Ledaean woman. His response becomes intense enough that he interrupts himself and returns to the socially acceptable smile.

    The subsequent musing on generation, aging, philosophy, and the inseparability of dancer and dance develops from that experience rather than from a recollection of Maud Gonne.  As a matter of fact, the recollection of Gonne would not require such a question of identifying the dancer and the dance.

    Do Not Put Gonne Where Yeats Put the Child

    The strongest evidence for putting Maud Gonne into “Among School Children” is Yeats’ own letter, and that evidence should not be ignored. But the letter says only that Gonne would find “a reference to your self.”

    It does not say that she is the child, that she is Leda, that the speaker is remembering her, or that the poem describes their youthful relationship. Those are later critical constructions. The poem itself never identifies Gonne, never names her, never narrates a memory of her, and never gives the speaker a reason to be thinking about her.

    What the poem actually gives us is much more specific: a sixty-year-old “smiling public man” enters a schoolroom; encounters children; dreams of a Ledaean body; looks at “one child or t’other there”; feels his heart “driven wild”; sees the woman of his imagination standing before him “as a living child”; allows her image to “float into the mind”; remembers his own “pretty plumage”; and then says “enough of that.”  He returns to smiling and presents himself as an “old scarecrow.” 

    The poem subsequently moves through generation, aging, philosophy, religious, and emotional images, and finally the question of whether dancer and dance can be separated.  That sequence follows a continuous psychological and philosophical movement. Maud Gonne is not needed anywhere within it; her presence actually dismisses the very important question of distinguishing the dancer from the dance.

    The conventional interpretation therefore gets the crucial passage backwards. The poem does not recall Maud Gonne; the critic recalls Maud Gonne and then attributes that recollection to the speaker. In doing so, criticism displaces the child who is actually there and replaces the speaker’s disturbing Ledaean fantasy with a much more manageable memory of a beloved woman.

    The task is not to deny that Yeats privately associated Gonne with the poem. It is to refuse to let that private association override the poem’s dramatic facts. Gonne may exist in the history surrounding the poem; she does not exist in its represented scene.

    The child does. Leda does. The speaker’s “wild” heart does. The command “enough of that” does. The smiling public man does. And the tension between that public man and the mind operating beneath his public smile is the psychological problem from which the rest of the poem develops.

    Maud Gonne is not the hidden answer to the poem. She is the critic’s answer to a problem the poem never asks us to solve by naming her. The poem asks us instead to watch what happens inside the mind of the man who stands among the children [3]—and then to ask, with him, whether we can ever finally distinguish the dancer from the dance, this is, the thoughts that may arise in the mind unbidden.

    Sources

    [1] William Butler Yeats. Letter to Maud Gonne.  The Letters of W. B. Yeats. Rupert Hart-Davis, 1954.
    [2]  Desmond Pacey. “Children in the Poetry of Yeats.” enotes.  Accessed October 7, 2026.
    [3] Linda Sue Grimes. “William Butler Yeats’ ‘Among School Children’.” Linda’s Literary Home. Accessed October 7, 2026.

  • Walt Whitman’s “I Hear America Singing”

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    Image: Walt Whitman Library of Congress/Getty Images

    Walt Whitman’s “I Hear America Singing”

    In “I Hear America Singing,” Walt Whitman’s speaker is offering a musical tribute to the laborers of America as they “sing,” that is work, cheerfully.  This 19th century hat-tip also recognizes the partiers who fill the night time with their good cheer.

    Introduction and Text of “I Hear America Singing”

    Walt Whitman’s “I Hear America Singing” is a song of praise. As a useful metaphor, “song” becomes the tool with which the speaker in Walt Whitman’s “I Hear America Singing” expresses the cheerful nature of the people he daily encounters in their labors and in also in their play.

    By claiming to hear them “singing,” he is rendering them cheerful and skilled in their labor.  The speaker’s heart is overflowing with praise for his fellow citizens.  As the speaker commences his tribute, he reports that he hears “America singing.” 

    Each song he encounters is unique.  Each “song” constitutes a different carol, not ordinary in the least, but each one offering praise and demonstrating joy in its being.  

    The joy and praise impress the speaker so much that he seems to be bursting with pride to be a part of such an honorable conglomeration of laboring folks.  His admiration makes him abundantly happy as he sings himself, making his poem.

    As the speaker observes his fellow citizens, he becomes optimistic, and his feelings no doubt color his reportage.  He offers what one might consider  to be an exaggeration of the joy and gratitude inspiring these people who are ordinary workers.  These folks are certainly not likely to become sycophants of the nothing-to-lose-but-our-chains crowd.

    Each of the eleven lines sprawls across the page and spills into the adjoining line to facilitate a new line.  The elongated sentences must be broken in unusual ways to accommodate the thoughts that this speaker wishes to share.   Whitman’s free verse style virtually always employs this rambling, sprawling form as he catalogs all the things his speakers see, hear, think, feel, or enjoy.

    I Hear America Singing

    I hear America singing, the varied carols I hear,
    Those of mechanics, each one singing his as it should be blithe and strong,
    The carpenter singing his as he measures his plank or beam,
    The mason singing his as he makes ready for work, or leaves off work,
    The boatman singing what belongs to him in his boat, the deckhand singing on the steamboat deck,
    The shoemaker singing as he sits on his bench, the hatter singing as he stands,
    The wood-cutter’s song, the ploughboy’s on his way in the morning, or at noon intermission or at sundown,
    The delicious singing of the mother, or of the young wife at work, or of the girl sewing or washing,
    Each singing what belongs to him or her and to none else,
    The day what belongs to the day—at night the party of young fellows, robust, friendly,
    Singing with open mouths their strong melodious songs.

    Reading of “I Hear America Singing” 

    Commentary on “I Hear America Singing”

    Walt Whitman’s “I Hear American Singing” features a speaker who is offering a musical tribute to the laborers of America; they cheerfully sing as they work. This 19th century effusion  also recognizes the partiers who fill the night time with their good cheer.

    First Movement:  Varied Laborers

    I hear America singing, the varied carols I hear,
    Those of mechanics, each one singing his as it should be blithe and strong,
    The carpenter singing his as he measures his plank or beam,
    The mason singing his as he makes ready for work, or leaves off work,
    The boatman singing what belongs to him in his boat, the deckhand singing on the steamboat deck,
    The shoemaker singing as he sits on his bench, the hatter singing as he stands,

    The speaker then commences listing the varied laborers whom he hears singing their joyous, praise songs.  First, he hears the mechanics.  Each mechanic remains busy working in his own unique way.  The speaker finds their manner “blithe and strong.” He then mentions the carpenter whose song sings out the measurement of “plank or beam.” 

    The mason is singing while he prepares himself for his workday even before he leaves for work.  The speaker hears the boatman caroling about the items that he possesses, items that fill his boat, while the deckhand also is singing on the steamboat’s deck.  The shoemaker is also singing, working at his bench, as the hat maker offers his carols where he stands. 

    Second Movement:  A Mother’s Delicious Singing

    The wood-cutter’s song, the ploughboy’s on his way in the morning, or at noon intermission or at sundown,
    The delicious singing of the mother, or of the young wife at work, or of the girl sewing or washing,
    Each singing what belongs to him or her and to none else,

    Continuing his catalog, the speaker hears the “wood-cutter’s song” and the song of the farmer, who is plowing his fields in the morning, at noon, and even as the sun sets in the evening.  A mother’s carols exemplify a “delicious” song.  

    The young wife is singing as she works, and a girl, who is likely serving as a maid, also sings as she sews and does the laundry.  All of these ordinary folks are performing their tasks uniquely—each in his/her own unique way.  They are not a faceless mass of working slobs.  

    They are priceless human beings living their American dreams.  Thus, they deserve respect, affection, and attention, and this speaker is revealing the love and cheerful attitudes these hard-working Americans are portraying as they simply go about their daily work routines.

    Third Movement:  Young Fellows and Party Time

    The day what belongs to the day—at night the party of young fellows, robust, friendly,
    Singing with open mouths their strong melodious songs.

    There is a time for work, and there is a time for leisure.  The speaker’s respect for work is equaled by his respect for party time.  The time of fellowship is also important as the revelers sing their leisure time.  

    Just as workers, they have offered their service, now as partiers they demonstrate that time away from work is also valuable.  The speaker describes a scene of the partiers as they sing open-mouthed.  They are young, cordial, hale and hearty as they carouse singing their “melodious songs.”  

    While day time offers all the beautiful songs of various workers and service providers, night time offers a time for the beautiful songs of leisure, fellowship, and renewal of spirit.  The sweet melodies of work and leisure are all significant and well worth noting.

  • William Butler Yeats’ “Lapis Lazuli”

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    Image: Williams Butler Yeats – Chicago History Museum

    William Butler Yeats’ “Lapis Lazuli”

    In his poem “Lapis Lazuli,”  William Butler Yeats has his speaker explore the issue of peace and tranquility despite a chaotic environment.

    Introduction and Text of “Lapis Lazuli”

    The speaker of  William Butler Yeats’ Eastern-philosophically influenced piece “Lapis Lazuli” opens his disquisition by announcing to his readers that the hysterical women are dismayed by artists who remain in non-attachment, while the times seem to require some definite movement against evil in order that they do not fall victim to obliteration.  

    Yeats composed “Lapis Lazuli” in 1938 as WWII was gearing up in Europe; thus the women are afraid that they will be become targets of the Zeppelins and airplanes that were employed to bomb London in WWI.  The allusion to “King Billy bomb-balls in” consists of a pun on William III at the Battle of the Boyne and Kaiser Wilhelm.

    Lapis Lazuli

    (for Harry Clifton)

    I have heard that hysterical women say
    They are sick of the palette and fiddle-bow,
    Of poets that are always gay,
    For everybody knows or else should know
    That if nothing drastic is done
    Aeroplane and Zeppelin will come out,
    Pitch like King Billy bomb-balls in
    Until the town lie beaten flat. 

    All perform their tragic play,
    There struts Hamlet, there is Lear,
    That’s Ophelia, that Cordelia;
    Yet they, should the last scene be there,
    The great stage curtain about to drop,
    If worthy their prominent part in the play,
    Do not break up their lines to weep.
    They know that Hamlet and Lear are gay;
    Gaiety transfiguring all that dread.
    All men have aimed at, found and lost;
    Black out; Heaven blazing into the head:
    Tragedy wrought to its uttermost.
    Though Hamlet rambles and Lear rages,
    And all the drop scenes drop at once
    Upon a hundred thousand stages,
    It cannot grow by an inch or an ounce. 

    On their own feet they came, or on shipboard,
    Camel-back, horse-back, ass-back, mule-back,
    Old civilisations put to the sword.
    Then they and their wisdom went to rack:
    No handiwork of Callimachus
    Who handled marble as if it were bronze,
    Made draperies that seemed to rise
    When sea-wind swept the corner, stands;
    His long lamp chimney shaped like the stem
    Of a slender palm, stood but a day;
    All things fall and are built again
    And those that build them again are gay. 

    Two Chinamen, behind them a third,
    Are carved in Lapis Lazuli,
    Over them flies a long-legged bird
    A symbol of longevity;
    The third, doubtless a serving-man,
    Carries a musical instrument. 

    Every discolouration of the stone,
    Every accidental crack or dent
    Seems a water-course or an avalanche,
    Or lofty slope where it still snows
    Though doubtless plum or cherry-branch
    Sweetens the little half-way house
    Those Chinamen climb towards, and I
    Delight to imagine them seated there;
    There, on the mountain and the sky,
    On all the tragic scene they stare.
    One asks for mournful melodies;
    Accomplished fingers begin to play.
    Their eyes mid many wrinkles, their eyes,
    Their ancient, glittering eyes, are gay.

    Dylan Thomas’ dramatic reading 

    Commentary on “Lapis Lazuli”

    The speaker is examining the issue of peace and tranquility despite a chaotic environment.

    First Stanza:  What the Speaker Believes

    I have heard that hysterical women say
    They are sick of the palette and fiddle-bow,
    Of poets that are always gay,
    For everybody knows or else should know
    That if nothing drastic is done
    Aeroplane and Zeppelin will come out,
    Pitch like King Billy bomb-balls in
    Until the town lie beaten flat. 

    The speaker sets up his argument to show that he believes certain complaining women are hysterical because they are lamenting a rather natural flux of history. The speaker will be attempting to demonstrate the healing affects of art, despite what those who descend into hysterics cry and wail about.

    Second Stanza:   Scenes from Plays

    All perform their tragic play,
    There struts Hamlet, there is Lear,
    That’s Ophelia, that Cordelia;
    Yet they, should the last scene be there,
    The great stage curtain about to drop,
    If worthy their prominent part in the play,
    Do not break up their lines to weep.
    They know that Hamlet and Lear are gay;
    Gaiety transfiguring all that dread.
    All men have aimed at, found and lost;
    Black out; Heaven blazing into the head:
    Tragedy wrought to its uttermost.
    Though Hamlet rambles and Lear rages,
    And all the drop scenes drop at once
    Upon a hundred thousand stages,
    It cannot grow by an inch or an ounce. 

    The second stanza continues by exemplifying scenes from famous plays.  The speaker is alluding to Shakespearean dramas of Hamlet and King Lear.  As actors portray the characters in the plays, they do so in a dignified and rather unattached manner. The actors fulfill the drama with their roles but do not allow their feelings to intrude upon their lines with weeping. 

    The actors never stop to lament over the tragedy that infuses their characters.   The actors know that the characters they are dramatizing while sporting great depth of emotion must be portrayed accurately.  Therefore they are not steeped in outward displays of lamentation. 

    Those actors pursuing theatre art remain self-possessed.  Otherwise their art would have suffered from over-emotional dabbing.  If art is to assist in mitigating sorrow, turbulence, and evil, then it must filter out the bathos that brings on hysterics.  The art of the actors prevents them from descending into deep depression over their characters, despite the depth of feeling that they must portray. 

    While tragedy by definition holds a range of emotion from despair to disdain to sorrowful outbursts, the act of making art brings on a settlement of feeling, otherwise no art could sustain itself. 

    Theatre art has always served society as a sort of safety valve wherein both actors and audience can view the subject of the performances with some distance.  That distance must then be framed in a way that not only lowers the temperature on sorrow but also elevates with the beauty of the truth that the content portrays.

    Third Stanza:   Civilizations Come and Go

    On their own feet they came, or on shipboard,
    Camel-back, horse-back, ass-back, mule-back,
    Old civilisations put to the sword.
    Then they and their wisdom went to rack:
    No handiwork of Callimachus
    Who handled marble as if it were bronze,
    Made draperies that seemed to rise
    When sea-wind swept the corner, stands;
    His long lamp chimney shaped like the stem
    Of a slender palm, stood but a day;
    All things fall and are built again
    And those that build them again are gay. 

    The third stanza reminds readers/listeners that civilization come and go, that the story of humankind is replete with societies rising and falling, like waves in the ocean.  While the thought may provoke gloom, it remains a fact that those civilization have indeed been vanquished. Even the great art of a Callimachus has come and gone.  

    That great sculptor was able to work his magic on marble as if it were a softer material, but where is he now?  Like those great civilization, he has come and gone. Despite the fact that societies and great artists come and go, there is still hope because just as they are torn down, they rise again.  Civilizations rise again, edifices are rebuilt, and new artists replace the old.

    Fourth Stanza:   The Carving

    Two Chinamen, behind them a third,
    Are carved in Lapis Lazuli,
    Over them flies a long-legged bird
    A symbol of longevity;
    The third, doubtless a serving-man,
    Carries a musical instrument. 

    In 1935, four years before the death of William Butler Yeats, the poet Harry Clifton gave Yeats a carving that according to Yeats some Chinese sculptor had done in lapis lazuli.  The gift accounts for Yeats’ dedication of the poem to Clifton. That carving of lapis lazuli feature a scene in which three Chinese men are trekking up a mountain-side.  

    Also featured is a long-legged bird flying overhead. The speaker claims that this bird is a symbol of a long life.  One of the Chinese men, the speaker claims, is a servant because he is transporting a musical instrument. 

    Fifth Stanza:  Men on a Stone

    Every discolouration of the stone,
    Every accidental crack or dent
    Seems a water-course or an avalanche,
    Or lofty slope where it still snows
    Though doubtless plum or cherry-branch
    Sweetens the little half-way house
    Those Chinamen climb towards, and I
    Delight to imagine them seated there;
    There, on the mountain and the sky,
    On all the tragic scene they stare.
    One asks for mournful melodies;
    Accomplished fingers begin to play.
    Their eyes mid many wrinkles, their eyes,
    Their ancient, glittering eyes, are gay.

    The three men are hiking up the mountain toward what Yeats’ speaker assumes is a little half-way house. Readers, however, might sense that that little house might be a temple. (Oddly, Yeats even claims that building is a “temple” in his letter to Dorothy Wellesley.  See below.) 

    Yeats’ speaker is interpreting that edifice as a building that resembles an Irish pub, in which the men may stop for refreshment and listen to some sorrowful tunes before trekking on.

    It may also be likely that the men are Buddhist monks, and they will stop at a temple to meditate, worship, and pray; the musical instrument will be employed for their chanting. But for the Yeatsian sensibility, as the scene unfolds, one may ask to hear a sad, melancholy tune, and the player begins to offer a rendition. 

    Thus, Chinese men listening to melancholy tunes may parallel the Western theatre audience watching Hamlet or King Lear.  The ancient faces of the Chinese men look on smiling but rather detached as they enjoy the melodies.

    The Lapis Lazuli Sculpture

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    Image: Lapis lazuli sculpture

    The painter, Sesshu, produced a long scroll of his painting inspired by his trek through China in the 15th century.  Both the theme and the appearance of the painting and this sculpture in lapis lazuli are similar. 

    Letter to Dorothy Wellesley, July 6 1935

    The following excerpt from his letter to Dorothy Wellesley describes the sculpture that inspired his poem “Lapis Lazuli”:

     [Lapis Lazuli] carved by some Chinese sculptor into the semblance of a mountain with temple, trees, paths, and an ascetic and pupil about to climb the mountain. Ascetic, pupil, hard stone, eternal theme of the sensual east. The heroic cry in the midst of despair. But no, I am wrong, the east has its solutions always and therefore knows nothing of tragedy. It is we, not the east, that must raise the heroic cry.”

    William Butler Yeats retained an interest in Eastern philosophy and art, and many of his poems, plays, and essays reflect that interest.  Although his understanding of Eastern religious philosophy was tantamount to a “romantic misunderstanding,” as described by T. S. Eliot, his poems are still worth studying.