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  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “Percy Bysshe Shelley”

    Image:  Edgar Lee Masters - Portrait by Francis J. Quirk https://francisquirk.blogspot.com/2017/03/visit-to-national-portrait-gallery.html
    Image:  Edgar Lee Masters – Portrait by Francis J. Quirk

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Percy Bysshe Shelley”

    The speaker in Edgar Lee Masters’ “Percy Bysshe Shelley” dramatizes the relationship between his father and himself, and those differences were vast and deep.

    Introduction and Text of “Percy Bysshe Shelley”

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Percy Bysshe Shelley” from his American classic Spoon River Anthology consists of five tercets, each constructing its own movement and rendering this character-poem named for a poet one of the most highly structured of all the Spoon River poem offerings. The poem creates a drama, featuring the odd relationship between a father and son.

    The father had great aspirations for his son, but Percy did not have the mental and spiritual wherewithal to live up to the father’s wishes.  The interesting missing feature from the relationship seems to be any malice.  There is no hint of friction between the two, although they had very different temperaments and desires.

    Percy Bysshe Shelley

    My father who owned the wagon-shop
    And grew rich shoeing horses
    Sent me to the University of Montreal.
    I learned nothing and returned home,
    Roaming the fields with Bert Kessler,
    Hunting quail and snipe.
    At Thompson’s Lake the trigger of my gun
    Caught in the side of the boat
    And a great hole was shot through my heart.
    Over me a fond father erected this marble shaft,
    On which stands the figure of a woman  
    Carved by an Italian artist.  
    They say the ashes of my namesake
    Were scattered near the pyramid of Caius Cestius
    Somewhere near Rome.

    Commentary “Percy Bysshe Shelley”

    In this poem, the speaker is dramatizing a relationship between a father and son, whose differences are many.  But while the relationship seems to have distance, there seems to be no animosity expressed by either father or son.

    First Movement:  Sent to Prestigious University

    My father who owned the wagon-shop
    And grew rich shoeing horses
    Sent me to the University of Montreal.

    Percy announces that his father ran a lucrative “wagon-shop,” earning enough money to send Percy to the “University of Montreal.”  The elder Shelley “grew rich shoeing horses.” 

    The claim sounds rather odd, and perhaps intends to serve as an exaggeration.  While such a shop might keep the owner from poverty, it is not likely that such a business would allow the owner to grow rich.

    Second Movement:  Learned Nothing

    I learned nothing and returned home,
    Roaming the fields with Bert Kessler,
    Hunting quail and snipe.

    In the second tercet, Percy admits that at the prestigious Canadian university, “I learned nothing.”  So after flunking out, he “returned home.”   Percy’s major activity from then on was hunting, “roaming the fields with Bert Kessler.”  They hunted “quail and snipe.”

    Third Movement:  An Accidental Shooting

    At Thompson’s Lake the trigger of my gun
    Caught in the side of the boat
    And a great hole was shot through my heart.

    Percy dies in the middle of his poem.  On one of his hunting expeditions “at Thompson’s Lake,” he is accidentally shot through the heart when “the trigger of [his] gun” becomes “caught in the side of the boat.”   Again, Percy’s penchant for exaggeration emerges, “a great hole was shot through my heart.”

    Fourth Movement:  A Grave Difference

    Over me a fond father erected this marble shaft,
    On which stands the figure of a woman  
    Carved by an Italian artist.  

    Percy’s grave is quite a spectacular sight.  An Italian artist’s “figure of a woman” guards his remains.  His “fond father” had “erected this marble shaft” and had the carving of the woman placed there.  

    The disconnect between the father and son is clearly demonstrated in this movement.  The father’s interests are not the same as the son’s.   Because the son’s only interest was hunting, it would be expected that some hunting related theme might be used to decorate the younger man’s grave.

    Fifth Movement:  A Bit of History

    They say the ashes of my namesake
    Were scattered near the pyramid of Caius Cestius
    Somewhere near Rome.

    Percy then states a bit of historical information regarding the biography of the poet Percy Bysshe Shelley, “[his] namesake.”   The speaker reveals that the poet’s ashes “were scattered near the pyramid of Caius Cestius / Somewhere near Rome.”

    Lack of Conflict

    The name of this character is quite ironic, but it symbolizes the vast difference between this father and son.  Percy could not even succeed in college, and his main interest was hunting, while the father had great ambitions for his son, beginning with his name and ending with the grave marker sculpted by an Italian artist.

    While most disparities of this nature between father and son lead to a stressful and often volatile relationship, there is no evidence that these two characters resented each other.   Percy remains rather emotionless but refers to his father as “a fond father” and seems very accepting of that fondness.  Percy just reports a few salient facts about this life but does not seem to be aggrieved, as so many of the Spoon River epitaphs reveal.

  • Pollen  

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    Image created by ChatGPT inspired by the poem

    Pollen  

    He speaks to you through the screen
    and you watch his lips and lick the words off yours
    as if you said them and they begin to drip like honey.

    Is it your dream or his?

    You each go into your own madness.
    You’d rather sleep than walk this crooked road.
    But he churns up the gravel  
    with his coming and going.
    You suspect he knew he was planting those seeds,
    but you had no clue you were a plowed field 
    waiting for them.

    But what can you do now that the rains have come
    and the sun has showered the fields
    and the plants are knee high and the bees’ legs
    are covered with that dust?

    What can you do but tell lies that will keep
    this world from calling you sinners?

    What can anyone do that will keep liars
    from sinning against their own souls?

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “Sarah Brown”

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    Image: Edgar Lee Masters Poor William’s Almanack

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Sarah Brown”

    “Sarah Brown” reveals a genuine character, employing the Buddhist term “Nirvana” to describe her afterlife experience. 

    Introduction and Text of “Sarah Brown”

    The character “Sarah Brown” reveals an acquaintance with Buddhism as she employs the term “Nirvana” to describe her afterlife experience.  As the speaker in Edgar Lee Masters’ “Sarah Brown” from the American classic Spoon River Anthology, she is one of the most positive characters of the lot.  Although it is hinted that she committed adultery, she emphasizes “love” over sex.  

    It was Sarah’s husband who called her love for Maurice “guilty love,” but since her marriage apparently remained intact, it is not clear that she actually experienced a sexual liaison with the grieving Maurice.

    Sarah Brown 

    Maurice, weep not, I am not here under this pine tree.  
    The balmy air of spring whispers through the sweet grass,
    The stars sparkle, the whippoorwill calls,  
    But thou grievest, while my soul lies rapturous
    In the blest Nirvana of eternal light!
    Go to the good heart that is my husband,  
    Who broods upon what he calls our guilty love:—
    Tell him that my love for you, no less than my love for him
    Wrought out my destiny—that through the flesh
    I won spirit, and through spirit, peace.
    There is no marriage in heaven,
    But there is love.

    Commentary on “Sarah Brown”

    The speaker in this epitaph attempts to console her grieving husband who seemed to misunderstand his wife’s spiritual nature.

    First Movement:  Dust to Dust, Not Spoken of the Soul

    Maurice, weep not, I am not here under this pine tree.

    Sarah Brown addresses Maurice, as he mourns at her grave side.  She reveals to him that she is not in the grave “under this pine tree.”

    Second Movement:  As the Soul Sees

    The balmy air of spring whispers through the sweet grass,
    The stars sparkle, the whippoorwill calls,  
    But thou grievest, while my soul lies rapturous
    In the blest Nirvana of eternal light!

    To prove to Maurice that she, that is, her soul, is not confined to the dark, dank hole in the ground, she describes the setting above ground: the stars are out and a bird is singing.  

    She asserts that Maurice is mourning, but she is experiencing a blessed state of ecstasy wrapped in the bliss of “eternal light.”  Sarah Brown exemplifies a Spoon River resident whose soul has evolved to a higher realm than most of the other complaining deceased of the town.

    Instead of railing against the unfairness of the small minded folks among whom she lived, as so many others do, she reveals a very positive, even minded attitude, and she tries only to console those left behind, especially Maurice who has come to her grave to mourn.

    Third Movement:  Winds From the East

    Go to the good heart that is my husband,  
    Who broods upon what he calls our guilty love:—

    After attempting to relieve Maurice’s grief, Sarah Brown commands him to go to her husband who is smarting because he thought of Sarah’s affection for Maurice as “guilty love.”

    Sarah describes her husband as “the good heart” and continues to think of him as her husband still, even though she has departed earth, and despite the claim she later makes in the final movement.  

    Another indication that Sarah Brown is influenced by Eastern philosophical thought is that she focuses primarily on action in the present tense—the “eternal now”—as referred to in Buddhism.

    Fourth Movement:  Heightened Awareness

    Tell him that my love for you, no less than my love for him
    Wrought out my destiny—that through the flesh
    I won spirit, and through spirit, peace.

    Sarah Brown then reveals the message she wishes Maurice to deliver to her husband.  She wants her husband to know that her love for both men has been instrumental in shaping who she has become, that is, that love has “wrought out [her] destiny.”

    She clarifies that “through the flesh / [she] won spirit, and through spirit, peace.”  Her infidelity was no mere ordinary dalliance prompted by greed, but because of her heightened awareness, played a rôle in leading her soul to divine awareness.

    Fifth Movement:  Love Cannot Be Confined

    There is no marriage in heaven,
    But there is love.

    Finally, Sarah Brown reveals that “There is no marriage in heaven / But there is love.”  Sarah Brown became a free spirit while living and thus concludes from heaven that if love is supreme in the afterlife, then marriage cannot confine love while on the earth plane.

  • Chief Muncie 

    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem
    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem

    Chief Muncie 

    for Thomas — poet, mentor, friend, colleague

    You belong to that world of long braids, and pipesmoke 
    coats papers you pull out of your weathered bag 
    and hand me and riddle my brain. Your poetry is 
    what I think ancient ruins are made of.  Gold glimmering
    from the domes of exotic dreams. Riders on horseback
    come dragging in the dust of a Montana evening and you
    capture their essence, and the streets of this Indiana town
    shine in the rain as it blackens the tree trunks, 

    then the yard shines, smell that rain and remember
    when the lilacs first tempted you to spring.  
    Our lives sprawl out before us
    begging us to inspect them and spindle the corners
    and ransack the trunks for bits of our living. 
    You have an eye that gathers the corn
    and when I finally squeeze out a word

    about how cold the river was that May, even though 
    the tulips flooded the houses on Main Street, 
    you look so surprised that I remember,
    and I have to remind you that I have lived here a long time, 
    even longer than when I knew you, took summer classes, 
    drove a car without a license, but I didn’t mean to confess,
    and I know you

    wouldn’t let me confess any real sins,
    like the ones I committed 
    when I thought feminism had arrived
    to save the world,
    before I knew that each soul 
    has to save its own life,

    but you didn’t know me then, and I am always so glad,
    because that was not me, the person you see here
    and care to listen to; I have news and a flag, 
    and as we walk to the burial ground
    where the chief proclaimed this land sacred, 

    I know you feel the stream flowing under our feet 
    and you hear the call to come home.

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “Andy the Night-Watch”

    Image: Edgar Lee Masters https://chicagoliteraryhof.org/inductees/profile/edgar-lee-masters
    Image: Edgar Lee Masters – Chicago Literary Hall of Fame

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Andy the Night-Watch”

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Andy the Night-Watch” remains one of the more pleasant accounts, as Andy reports his simple duties as a Spoon River security guard.

    Introduction and Text of “Andy the Night-Watch”

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Andy the Night-Watch” from the American classic Spoon River Anthology features a night watchman who mentions another Spoon River resident Doc Hill in his report.   Andy’s account is straight forward without the innuendos that accompany many of the reports.  Andy is philosophical about his lot, seeing himself in a long line of men who have performed his job of night watchman for Spoon River.

    Interestingly, because Andy encounters Doc Hill in his nightly duties, he supports the physician’s claim made in his epitaph that he had gone about Spoon River both night and day caring for the sick.  Andy passes no moral judgment on the doc.  

    And Andy reveals no moral turpitude as so many of these characters do. Andy’s apparent guilelessness makes him one of the most appealing characters of the Spoon River citizens.  Most want to excuse their own sins while blaming others for them.

    Therefore, Andy’s epitaph surfaces as one of the more pleasant accounts, as he reports the simple duties he performed as a Spoon River security guard.   Andy’s only purpose is to offer a brief report about how he spent his time and to contrast his purpose on earth with his current tranquility, which he seems to appreciate.

    Andy the Night-Watch 

    In my Spanish cloak,
    And old slouch hat,
    And overshoes of felt,
    And Tyke, my faithful dog,
    And my knotted hickory cane,
    I slipped about with a bull’s-eye lantern
    From door to door on the square,
    As the midnight stars wheeled round,
    And the bell in the steeple murmured  
    From the blowing of the wind;
    And the weary steps of old Doc Hill
    Sounded like one who walks in sleep,
    And a far-off rooster crew.  
    And now another is watching Spoon River
    As others watched before me.
    And here we lie, Doc Hill and I
    Where none breaks through and steals,
    And no eye needs to guard.

    Commentary on “Andy the Night-Watch”

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Andy the Night-Watch” reports his simple duties as a Spoon River security guard and then makes an interesting statement of comparison between his earthly life and his after-life.

    First Movement:  A Guard’s Accessories

    In my Spanish cloak,
    And old slouch hat,
    And overshoes of felt,
    And Tyke, my faithful dog,
    And my knotted hickory cane,

    Andy first describes his clothing and accessories, reporting that he wore a cloak which he describes as “Spanish.”  He donned a hat which was of the old and slouch variety. Finally, he wore overshoes made of felt—likely so he could amble about quietly on his nightly duties.

    For company and possible security assistance, Andy kept his companion pet dog Tyke along with him.  And he also carried a cane made of “knotted hickory.”  Such are the simple necessities for a night watchman in the small town of Spoon River.  Apparently, there was no need for a weapon other than the hickory cane.  

    Second Movement:  A Guard’s Duties

    I slipped about with a bull’s-eye lantern
    From door to door on the square,
    As the midnight stars wheeled round,
    And the bell in the steeple murmured  
    From the blowing of the wind;

    After cataloguing his accessories, Andy then proceeds to report his duties.  But before mentioning his duties, he inserts a further item, a lantern with a bull’s eye, to fill out the list of accessories that he either carried or wore.

    Andy describes his movement as “slip[ping] about,” likely indicating that he moved slowly as he checked the status of each door to the businesses and offices in town.  Most nights he was fortunate that not much seemed to be happening, so he was free to notice the “midnight stars” that “wheeled around.”  

    He also notes that he listened to “the bell in the steeple,” which he describes as making a murmuring sound as the wind blew past.  Again, Andy is demonstrating a calm, appreciative individual whose demeanor contrasts greatly with so many of the angry, vengeful after-life reporters from the Spoon River Cemetery.

    Third Movement:    Old Doc Hill

    And the weary steps of old Doc Hill
    Sounded like one who walks in sleep,
    And a far-off rooster crew.  

    It is in the third movement that Andy mentions “old Doc Hill,” whom the reader has previously encountered among these Spoon River after-death reporters.    Andy would hear the doctor’s “weary steps,” and Andy claims that those steps made it seem that the doctor might be walking in his sleep.  Likely, the shuffling sound put Andy in mind of sleep-walkers.

    Andy then mentions that he heard a far-off rooster crowing, which suggests that it is close to dawn.  The implication supports Doc Hill’s report that he went about caring for the sick all through the night.

    Fourth Movement:   Now Someone Else Guards

    And now another is watching Spoon River
    As others watched before me.
    And here we lie, Doc Hill and I
    Where none breaks through and steals,
    And no eye needs to guard.

    Andy then returns to his present circumstances wherein he, with a touch of melancholy, avers that someone else is now performing his night job of “watching Spoon River.”   And Andy places himself in the long line of history; the new person is watching “as others watched before me,” he philosophically opines.

    Both Andy and Doc Hill are now in their graves where no medical attention is required and where no one will break in to steal from rightful owners.  No one needs “to guard” anything in this final resting place.

    Andy has successfully compared his earthly duties to his duties in his current circumstance by simply stating the fact that no one ever breaks into things in the after-life world to steal things.  Thus, in that place, it is not necessary to have men who watch the night, which can become a dangerous, crime infested time on earth among the living.

  • Driving

    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem
    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem

    Driving

    Grasping this world that seems so solid in motion
    and the wheel in my hands so obedient.
    Frost-burned weeds out in the fields 
    wave acknowledgment of December wind.
    Others wind down the concrete path.

    When did I begin this route through space?
    I answer in riddles to my self 
    but quote experts in debate.
    The sun on any cornfield atones.
    And any rainbow ties together beauty and truth:
    Science has proven that much.

    The next town always owns me
    motoring across country
    in this shell of mystery 
    that reveals itself layer by layer
    until, somewhat like an onion, its pungent center
    pervades, but without dissolving.

    I will stop again in a few hours
    just to rest these restless thoughts,
    to refuel the vehicle,
    to reorient my faith
    that my direction still leans the way
    the map leads.

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “Doc Hill”

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    Image: Edgar Lee Masters

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Doc Hill”

    Doc Hill was spurned by his wife and apparently also by his lackluster son.  The sad physician turned to healing the sick to find an outlet for his love and affection.

    Introduction and Text of “Doc Hill”

    The 13-line epitaph “Doc Hill” from Edgar Lee Masters’ American classic, Spoon River Anthology features the pathetic character of a town doctor who basically lived his life through the people he cared for in his medical practice.  Like many of the other graveyard complaining epitaphs, Doc Hill’s is full of pathos and self-pity.  

    But while apparently erasing from memory his own family, the physician does hold special regard for the many mourners who attended his funeral.  He especially entertained deep sorrow, however, for one Spoon River resident, Em Stanton. 

    Although the doc does not elaborate upon his relationship with Em Stanton, his reticence allows his audience to imagine the extent that would cause him such sorrow at seeing her standing alone grieving.

    Doc Hill 

    I went up and down the streets
    Here and there by day and night,
    Through all hours of the night caring for the poor who were sick.
    Do you know why?  
    My wife hated me, my son went to the dogs.
    And I turned to the people and poured out my love to them.
    Sweet it was to see the crowds about the lawns on the day of my funeral,  
    And hear them murmur their love and sorrow.
    But oh, dear God, my soul trembled, scarcely able
    To hold to the railing of the new life
    When I saw Em Stanton behind the oak tree
    At the grave,
    Hiding herself, and her grief!

    Commentary on “Doc Hill”

    Doc Hill confesses that his attention to his medical practice was only in part to assist the needy; it also assisted him by infusing into his life the love and affection that he failed to find in his own family life.

    The dejected Doc Hill harbors a secret that will remain a mystery. Readers are left to imagine the meaning of the implied relationship between the physician and Em Stanton, a woman who secretly visits the gravesite as the doctor’s body is being interred.

    First Movement:  The Wages of Altruism?

    I went up and down the streets
    Here and there by day and night,
    Through all hours of the night caring for the poor who were sick.

    The doc begins by reporting that he spent most of his time with his patients, most of whom were poor as well as sick.   Doc Hill made his way along the streets of the town during both daylight hours and during the nighttime.  His reason for spending that time away from home was in order to care for sick people, who needed and appreciated him.  

    As the doc’s life centered on his profession, he seemingly behaved as a rather altruistic individual.  However, readers become more and more skeptical of the scads of information given out by these Spoon River grave reporters.  

    Most of epitaphs include in their reporting complaints offered solely for the purpose of rehabilitating their reputations.  Instead of accepting any fault on their part, they are quick to lay all blame on others for their pathetic lots.  

    While Doc Hill has some blame to lay on his wife and his reprobate son, his main issue is that while he was seemingly abandoned and/or mistreated by his own family, the many sick and poor people of the town came to love him for his medical service to them.

    Yet, the physician seems to leave open the possibility that his motives were perhaps not as selfless and altruistic as they may seem.  Thus he finds it important to explain his reasoning for giving so much attention to others outside of his home life.

    Second Movement:  No Love at Home

    Do you know why?  
    My wife hated me, my son went to the dogs.
    And I turned to the people and poured out my love to them.

    Lest one think the doctor was an entirely altruistic workaholic or simply obsessed with his medical practice, he wants to explain that such was not the case.  The doc begins by proffering the question as to why he spent so much time with his ill patients.  

    He then reveals “why”:  His wife detested him, and his son felt no better toward his father.  Thus the doc had no family life.  He offers no details about his wife and son, other than that they abandoned him emotionally.

    The doctor had to find consolation somewhere so he turned to his profession that involved other people, particularly sick folks, who became appreciative of his services.  However, the doc does not seem to assert that he was merely looking for love for himself. 

    Part of his personality seems genuinely caring, although it also offers him an excuse for remaining absent from his home, marriage, and fatherhood.  Likely the doc’s explanation makes him sound more altruistic than one who is expecting attention in return: he was looking for people to whom he could give his love and caring. 

    The doc’s medical profession afforded him the opportunity, or perhaps excuse, to spend all of his time away from his own family while attending to others.  Less pathetic  and crass than many of the Spoon River crowd, he, nevertheless, remains one of the forlorn characters as he spins his yarn of sorrow.

    Third Movement:   The Return of Love

    Sweet it was to see the crowds about the lawns on the day of my funeral,  
    And hear them murmur their love and sorrow.

    Interestingly, the day’s events of his funeral allow him to revel in the return of the love he had bestowed, for he hears sweet murmurings emanating from the many folks attending the event as they offer their little tributes to the man who tended to their health needs.  Thus in death, he has achieved what he was never able to achieve in life with his own family.  

    The summation of caring and affection that showed itself on the day of his funeral seems to make up for the familial affection he had not experienced.   And that lack seems to extend into death, for he mentions the presence of neither his wife nor his son at his funeral.  Readers then may assume that they were not present, or that the doc cared so little for them that he fails to bother to account for their reactions to his death.

    Fourth Movement:  A Grieving Paramour?

    But oh, dear God, my soul trembled, scarcely able
    To hold to the railing of the new life
    When I saw Em Stanton behind the oak tree
    At the grave,
    Hiding herself, and her grief!

    However, the doc does reveal a rather mysterious implication about himself when he describes a woman, Em Stanton, whom he observes as she appears to hide “behind the oak tree,” pathetically watching the events at the grave-site.  Em Stanton appears to be assuaging her grief as she hides from the other mourners.  

    The observation of Em standing behind a tree apparently grief-stricken shakes the doc so badly that he can hardly hold his soul power together as he tries to “hold to the railing of the new life.”  This extreme reaction does seem to indicate that his relationship with Em Stanton likely indicates a close and deep emotional tie.

    The doc’s showering of affection on the townsfolk possibly included a romantic relationship with the woman behind the tree, Em Stanton, a woman who is now left to grieve in hiding.  By extension, readers might wonder if there may be other “Em-Stantons,” who simply failed to appear and mourn as his own family failed to appear.

  • The Eternal Now

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    Image created by ChatGPT inspired by the poem

    The Eternal Now

    Mind is musing on the Eternal Now:
    Seamless width where past and future fold
    Into a single point of searing light
    No clock  no calendar  no fleeting hour
    Only unbroken being always present

    Heart beats the drum with Its rhythm
    No yesterday  no tomorrow  only today 
    Not bracing for what has not yet come
    Sounding its music in the present skin
    Vibrant  adamant  unyielding

    Soul remains enshrined in Its temple
    A quiet realm where time cannot intrude
    Where every breath is neither first nor last
    But simply is  complete unto itself
    Eternity has no length  only depth

  • Edgar Lee Masters’ “Conrad Siever”

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    Image: Edgar Lee Masters – Jack Masters

    Edgar Lee Masters’ “Conrad Siever”

    Conrad Siever contrasts his feelings for two distinctive segments of his land: the part with the cemetery he finds “wasted”; but he loved the acres that held his apple tree and lovingly nurtured that tree in life and continues to do so even after death. 

    Introduction and Text of “Conrad Siever”

    The speaker of Edgar Lee Masters’ “Conrad Siever” from Spoon River Anthology is contrasting his feelings for the acres of his property where a cemetery is located with those acres that hold his prized apple tree.    

    Siever’s property is mentioned in two other Spoon River poems; in “Hare Drummer,” Hare asks if the young folk “still go to Siever’s / For cider, after school.”  Also in the epitaph,”Amelia Garrick,” Amelia refers to Siever’s woods, “Where the thickets from Siever’s woods / Have crept over.”  Thus, the reader infers that Conrad Siever owned many acres of land.

    The structure of this poem presents two movements that basically offer the theme of “not there, but here.” The first movement dramatizes the speaker’s negative or “not there” rubric; he did not love the part of his property that tendered certain features.  

    The second movement dramatizes the “but here” or positive part of the construction, which is the section of his land that he loved and attended to in life and seemingly continues to do so in death.

    Conrad Siever

    Not in that wasted garden
    Where bodies are drawn into grass
    That feeds no flocks, and into evergreens
    That bear no fruit—
    There where along the shaded walks
    Vain sighs are heard,
    And vainer dreams are dreamed
    Of close communion with departed souls—
    But here under the apple tree
    I loved and watched and pruned
    With gnarled hands
    In the long, long years;
    Here under the roots of this northern-spy
    To move in the chemic change and circle of life,
    Into the soil and into the flesh of the tree,
    And into the living epitaphs
    Of redder apples!

    Commentary on “Conrad Siever”

    Conrad Siever loved his apple tree and lovingly nurtured it in life and death.  

    First Movement:   Fruitless Evergreens

    Not in that wasted garden
    Where bodies are drawn into grass
    That feeds no flocks, and into evergreens
    That bear no fruit—
    There where along the shaded walks
    Vain sighs are heard,
    And vainer dreams are dreamed
    Of close communion with departed souls—

    Despite his owning considerable property, Siever begins with a negative assertion that he did not take his essential being in “that wasted garden,” where despite the continued interest of other people, there is no food for “flocks” and where fruitless evergreens abide. 

    He points out that that wasted garden strikes him as rather useless, where “vain sighs are heard,” and he adds that even “vainer dreams are dreamed.”  He is revealing that the part of  his property that includes a cemetery is where those vain dreamers come to attempt “close communion with departed souls.”

    Siever first concentrates on the part of his land that he finds least useful and therefore least important.  By beginning with a sort of condemnation of uselessness, he thereby emphasizes his interest in productive endeavors, which he finds important, much more significant than the land that merely hold the bodies of dead folks.

    Second Movement:  Not There, but Here

    But here under the apple tree
    I loved and watched and pruned
    With gnarled hands
    In the long, long years;
    Here under the roots of this northern-spy
    To move in the chemic change and circle of life,
    Into the soil and into the flesh of the tree,
    And into the living epitaphs
    Of redder apples!

    Siever has remarked that it is not to those useless parts of his property that he was attached but instead to “here under the apple tree.”  It was in this place that the speaker  afforded his affection for his property; he worked on his apple tree, pruning and tending to its needs, even as his hands became “gnarled,” likely causing pain during his hard labor.  Obviously, Siever’s real love and occupation was for his apple tree; thus, he tended it with great care and affection.

    Now Siever is buried under his beloved “northern-spy,” specifically and more importantly, “under the roots.” And he attests that he is still attending to his former occupation.  His spirit is now able to “move in the chemic change and circle of life.” That spirit circulates “into the soil and into the flesh of the tree.”  

    Siever dramatically and triumphantly announces that just as when alive he strove to produce better apples, his spirit is now accomplishing the same goal as it pushes itself “into the living epitaphs / Of redder apples!”

    Siever has shown that he bestowed his love and attention upon the fertile, apple-growing segment of his land.  Instead of “epitaphs” of dead people, he continues to grow living reports of useful fruit as he continues to pursue “redder apples.”  

    He is demonstrating that his loving interest was in useful, productive activity, rather than dreaming and sighing and eternal waiting.  Even in death, his strong spirit continues his dedication to caring for his apple producing tree.

  • City Boy 

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    Image created by Gemini inspired by the poem

    City Boy

    what she got for marrying the devil . . .    

    He was a peacock about his manhood,
    Measured his mind by the length of it.
    He was kicked out of high school but cut his wisdom
    Teeth on the Encyclopædia Britannica.
    He went to tell President Nixon
    How to run the country,
    And ended up in jail—in Wyoming.

    He told stories about planting his seed, 
    Claimed he was directed
    By an expert in eugenics. Threatened
    To incest his own daughter.
    But his head served as a block of meat
    His co-workers at the wire factory
    Would slice off at the lunch break..

    His mother was a gentle, efficient woman.
    His father was just gentle.
    But his brothers were determined
    To shit in every yard in the north end.

    He gave people the creeps.
    He was too self-slung to know.
    Narcissus breathed on his mirror.
    He made people cringe:  like when
    He took pictures of his sister in her coffin—
    The sister he told his brothers only he could satisfy.
    He wanted to remember her before she rotted…
    One can only guess…the way you remember 
    Road kill before it goes to flies.

    A slightly different version of appears in my collection Turtle Woman & Other Poems